how long?

By WatchTheWorldCollapse

 End of seemingly endless rope.
Hoisted up, letting me down slowly.
Feels like bliss, this oblivion.
Soon we all fall.

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Copyright 2011 WatchTheWorldCollapse
Published on Wednesday, November 30, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: soon enough we all come to the end of our ropes. seems like a worded suicide by a lettered noose. thanks for the entry

  • terris crimson On Wednesday, November 30, 2011, terris crimson (169)By person wrote:

    this is very true, even though it is short, it is moving. well done.

  • WatchTheWorldCollapse On Wednesday, November 30, 2011, WatchTheWorldCollapse (15)By person wrote:

    i actually just wrote this for some competition someone had started. i could only use 20 words

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