Beautiful Afterlife

By WatchTheWorldCollapse

Oh! sweet child
close your eyes that they may open in bliss
lovers close in for oblivion
obsidian kiss

call to the sky, transmission of mind
mutating clouds open up wide 

rest assured the ground will fade
as you float away

relish in fear their fainting hearts
tainted walls beneath the painted art
remind the world
you kept yourself from falling apart

hierarchy for the love of your existance
keeps you a place in peace
beyond belief 

Oh! sweet child 
let loose of your tears
let them flow as the rivers have for years

leave and let the lore create
tie the ends and witness fate

your earthly work is done
see you in the afterlife








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Copyright 2011 WatchTheWorldCollapse
Published on Sunday, December 4, 2011.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, December 4, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Ladyhawke pretty well summed things up but know that you have a fan in me too, thanks.

  • Ladyhawke On Sunday, December 4, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Where does this come from?!? Your word choice, your style, your everything!! This is so beauitful. All you works have a....a fragility, a constant unyeilding, but at the same time, soft beautiful tone to them. You my friend are a great poet. I really like this, overall, everything. Just, wow.

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