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"Have to agree with LA here, I like how there is a long punctuation at the ending, sort of like a cliff hanger.. Interesting subject "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "The Art of Breathing" by rosemaiden

"I agree with Jade, an easy feeling to feel but a hard one to describe. Nicely written"
Posted by addicted_angel on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden

"Wow, I personally tend to use fragmented imagery in my writing, and I've always had a fascination with the sea, this was a gem."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "The Art of Drowning" by rosemaiden

"wow thank you very much"
Posted by rosemaiden on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden

"Ive gone over and over this same topic and haven't been able to word it as well as you. Well written."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden

"pure emotion pouring to from the heart. you painted a real picture, which I was able to relate too... It has a mysterious ending, I want to read more."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden

"Bongo imagined himself drowning while reading through this piece. Feeling each single word all the way till the end. It felt very right. "
Posted by lordbongo on "The Art of Drowning" by rosemaiden

"I love the simplicity and truth there is in this"
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "The Art of Breathing" by rosemaiden

"Beautifully written but don't depend on others to breathe or you may find yourself breathless."
Posted by River Lily on "The Art of Breathing" by rosemaiden

"This makes me think of sept 12th.. I had never noticed befor, that you hear planes all the time. But I sure noticed that they were gone that day. It was frightningly quiet. Quite a feeling, you brought back.. Well done. ^V^ "
Posted by veingo on "Bird of Metal" by rosemaiden

"Don't try to explain it just enjoy it while you can. Very interesting concept to ponder, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "My Side" by rosemaiden

"Curious piece and quite original, loved those cotton clouds, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Bird of Metal" by rosemaiden

"it iz zo very lyrical, im sure thiz would sound zo excellent set to musicâ™ªâ™«â™ªâ™«"
Posted by Unknown on "My Side" by rosemaiden

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