Comments by All Members
- "Thanks for reading.I appreciate it.All comments and polite constructive criticism are welcome. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Negatives" by Ortolan
- "This has a good rhythm and message. I like the short sharp verse. It took me on a journey of pain and anger. "
Posted by Unknown on "Negatives" by Ortolan
- " I have mixed feelings about that and being in what is rapidly becoming the common poverty myself I couldn't get a modern one til recently.I nearly broke my body hauling it out.So glad the nightmare is over though.Ty. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Thousand Ton TV" by Ortolan
- "1000 pound of mental retardation is what my grandad used to call the old ass Zenith circa 1969 in his living room till this past week when my brother and I and two of his friends had to drag that shit out of there. House is a time capsule 100 years of history in this house but its been vacant since his passing in November. So this really resonated with me. "
Posted by Unknown on "Thousand Ton TV" by Ortolan
- "Fascinating enigma. Your complexity mingles well in poetry. The bread of wisdom, isn't sweet. Thank you for sharing with me. - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "A loyal reader you are, and to appreciate the dark-side is what it's all about here to rise above it. - Å’
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Posted by Ortolan on "The Uglification" by Ortolan
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