Comments by All Members
- "I almost wonder if by loss of soul you mean just a loss of who you are or if someone "depreciates" themselves. Very thought-invoking work! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Loss of Soul" by Ortolan
- "Hauntingly grotesque, I like it! Raw and to the point. Dark, and yet delightful its twisted nature. -Write on"
Posted by soul_versing on "Parseus" by Ortolan
- "Well, truthfully I wasn't sure it was necessary either as it is a dying myth, but you never know what some might presume I suppose especially since the one I posted right after it was ' Devil is Laughing' (which I might add is obviously not about 'The Devil', but rather myself). True these things become known once you read it through though, so I appreciate you taking the time.Again, Thanks for reading! - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Loss of Soul" by Ortolan
- "I laughed at the authors note as I felt no need for it to be included I understood you perfectly with your write :) nicely done"
Posted by Unknown on "Loss of Soul" by Ortolan
- "After reading it again I decided to change day to evening in the last stanza and also the words the last two lines end with.Thanks for the tip. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Sunset Chaos Marvel" by Ortolan
- "The poem had a good flow but kind of fell off at the end. I feel like the last two sentences of the poem should rhyme though. Its a simple fix considering the amount of words that you can rhyme with day. Well done over all. Its catchy. "
Posted by Unknown on "Sunset Chaos Marvel" by Ortolan
- "I appreciate your appraisal, that is exactly the impact I want to have, thank you very much. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan
- "Ah, this seethed, bravo. I loved the thundering emotion that your words delivered, sending on each and every one of them with a poignant slap. Thank you"
Posted by Lab Rat on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan
- "Yes and no...but hey, we're all a weird in out own unique way.Thanks Void! - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan
- "Found all kinds of references here, Big Brother, Monsanto, elitism, the complacency of herd mentality, Matrix - like structures. Great read. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by Dimensions on "Zion Lazerus" by Ortolan
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