Comments by All Members
- "I believe this post is highly relate-able on many different levels. I would assume this is about a lost love, but it could be about any number of things. Well written, sad and entirely honest. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Burden" by Demyelinated
- "Thanks for the kind words everyone. It's good to feel the support. I have kept my poems pretty hidden throughout my life. And yes, the numbers are accurate descriptions of the distance from where my wife and I were driving from one night, the distance from my door to the chair, etc. but they are also in reference to beta wave thresholds as it relates to awareness states. Also beta comes from ancient alphabets that pronounced "b" as "Beth", my wife's name."
Posted by Demyelinated on "b" by Demyelinated
- "A challenging read with a chilling flavor through time, and getting colder as we get older, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "b" by Demyelinated
- "Wonderfully written. I get the metaphore here, but I'm curious, do the numbers have any significance?"
Posted by Unknown on "b" by Demyelinated
- "Sounds like you definitely need some YOU time, without feeling guilty. As Clint Eastwood said "A man has got to know his limitations" - so learn how to say "NO" You will figure things out, eventually. Thanks for sharing this trapped-in-life and personal piece so welll expressed. We learn from our mistakes."
Posted by dwells on "Breaks" by Demyelinated
- "A lot can happen in five years while the world keeps spinning. So who changed the most, to widen that gulf between you? Possibly your drowning? (in something or somebody) Thanks for this thoughtful piece."
Posted by dwells on "Foreword and Epilogue" by Demyelinated
- "hmmm reminds me of something I wrote... all of this... when one swells with the burden of everything... thanks, and good luck."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Keep This" by Demyelinated
- "Very thoughtful and indeed insightful. The proverbial straw that broke the camels back most likely. One unguarded moment, one night of bliss, a lifetime of regrets - or "what ifs?""
Posted by dwells on "Undercurrents" by Demyelinated
- "Acceptance comes with maturity - just make sure that it is acceptable to you too. Don't resign yourself to "fate" as some would call it - when it is really an excuse for laziness. Thoughtful poem well written, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "One Last Time" by Demyelinated
- "this sat heavy on my heart .. i don't know why either. i can't say i've been in a situation like that but it sounds so familiar.. this was, in the rawest sense, beautiful. and tragic. wonderful. inspirational.. thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Sticky Note" by Demyelinated
- "this reads like the hopelessness of an inner struggle, bordering on panic. the repetition brings this point home. thanks for sharing and welcome to dpville."
Posted by natalie on "Safe" by Demyelinated
- "When it comes down to it, thats all anybody ever wants....to be safe. To make the ones you love safe, and be able to keep them safe, even if it means sacrificing yourself. This was beautifully written. Greatly expressed. Brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Safe" by Demyelinated
- "The repetition drives home the feelings of hopelessness, the futility is palpable. I guess all one can really do is wait, and hope the outcome is a welcome one. Write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Safe" by Demyelinated
- "I have felt that way , worried to death , I had flashbacks . good read ,I got chills and went to look and made sure all was safe , "
Posted by Unknown on "Safe" by Demyelinated
- "Yes... Hello there and welcome to DarkPoetry... Roam around the valley.. There is plenty for you to do, see read and play with!!! I'm a lil on the twisted side but there are so many talents.. Kinkifrog, wintersembrace rswhitelock, just to name a few..."
Posted by Devilish on "Sticky Note" by Demyelinated
- "Hmmmmm. I feel you... Can't tell you how many times I have felt this way... Nice work!"
Posted by Devilish on "Safe" by Demyelinated
- "Sounds like you are trying to talk yourself out of something as yet undecided, but eventually ordained and inexorable."
Posted by dwells on "Sticky Note" by Demyelinated
