Comments by All Members
- "Old comment from me but still true as ever - " our minds create our own private Hell; more exquisite than any devil could ever conjure up" thinking John Milton maybe? Thanks for sharing this."
Posted by dwells on "Incomplete" by HadassahDare
- "I like the subtle rhyme, e.g. 'head.... hostage' that unfolds when I read this... and the feeling of sinking withdrawal is well expressed, thanks. welcome to the valley"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Incomplete" by HadassahDare
- "Whoooo I swear I fell ya!!! old demons taking over me, old needs holding my thoughts hostage... YES!!! "
Posted by Devilish on "Incomplete" by HadassahDare
- "Thank you. I kind of hate the rhyming but this piece is very important to me due to the subject."
Posted by HadassahDare on "To Be" by HadassahDare
- "Wow!!! I love your work!!! This is beautiful! Letting out the demons of the past pale blue fingertips caress my heart I forgive, I forget... Sweeeeet!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Pale Blue Fingertips" by HadassahDare
- "So many people confuse "nice" girls with "good" girls, and you are good. Kind and good. And nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Disposable" by HadassahDare
- "Second wife probably not a good analogy to your poem. Avoid losing the #1status if you can stand the test of time, and the slings, arrows, etc.; best wishes."
Posted by dwells on "Second" by HadassahDare
- "That gave me chills... I love the wicked in myself... Exctasy and damnation, round and round, sounds like four play to me!!!! "
Posted by Devilish on "Wicked" by HadassahDare
- "I love the way you write. So very vivid and shameless... Two of my most favorite things... A shameless visual keeps me a lil wet... Thank you!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Drift" by HadassahDare
- "I'm not really trying to be famous, just published, and I write more than lyrics and poetry. I've written short stories and I'm working on a novel. It's a dream, a goal, what have you. By the by, not a second wife here. First and only."
Posted by HadassahDare on "Second" by HadassahDare
- "Hi H.D. - give a look at "Who are you and I" by broken all over again - because I just gave her a thought on poets and money. Second Place is something all second wives often contend with all their lives, unfortunately - from one who knows."
Posted by dwells on "Second" by HadassahDare
- "Perhaps a common thread that might lead to more developement? Just a suggestion because these short pieces, although very intriguing, leave me wanting more. But, nice enough as is, since you are the travel guide - thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Almosts" by HadassahDare
- "Hmmmmm... I for some reason understand!!! Hello there and welcome to DarkPoetry!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Guilt" by HadassahDare
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