Drift
By HadassahDare
Cigarette smoke drifting
through the air
Drifts of you slowly
floating by the ceiling
Parts of you still drift
in corners
of the room
Just like the taste of
wine in my mouth
bittersweet
but
very much alive
It's very easy to say good-bye
It's
the forgetting
that's hard.
(originally written 2003)
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Copyright 2011 HadassahDare
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A former member wrote:
I feel the flow a of the poem i feel like i the poem is litterly flowing around me like that smoke and i'm inhaling it an letting it flow through my body
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On Wednesday, September 7, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I love the way you write. So very vivid and shameless... Two of my most favorite things... A shameless visual keeps me a lil wet... Thank you!!!
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On Wednesday, September 7, 2011, HadassahDare
(21) wrote:
Thank you my dear.
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A former member wrote:
Cigarettes and mouths. Two of my favorite things.
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On Wednesday, September 7, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Lol... I love your comments...
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2011, HadassahDare
(21) wrote:
Mine, as well. I, apparently, also really enjoy the word drift. Who knew?