Comments by All Members
- "If only the country could get its act together"
Posted by Unknown on "Wages" by Salum
- "Perfect. That is th exact meaning of love and adoration. Being together in your heart and mind wherever you may be. Moments of caring and affection can tell us so much without words. Just perfect."
Posted by Unknown on "A Moment of Forever" by Salum
- "I love it. I can relate I feel like I am a bad poet compared to the people on here."
Posted by Unknown on "do i belong?" by Salum
- "This is perfectly alluring. There's only a chance for an escape; even if you're dead."
Posted by Unknown on "After We Die" by Salum
- "There's our Critique Lord .... You definitly get a rise out of who ever it is good or bad.... That's why we love ya... "
Posted by Devilish on "Who Are You?" by Salum
- ".....it doesn't matter when the personal moments happen, its how they changed you, added to you.
helped, or help you shape who you are. You are right, we may not eat the same food, or sleep at the same times, or even work in anything related to to what each other does, but our time is still consumed by those things, and personal moments, whenever and wherever they may happen, are still precious, no matter who you are. "
Posted by Salum on "Who Are You?" by Salum
- "I guess if we use vague enough words, it does become simple. I dont think my work is the same as yours, we may not eat the same foods even if we both shit sitting down, we dont sleep with the same people same place, time or duration, and as for "personal moments" I think those may occur during any and all of the others, no?.... Not an original question, is it? What is interesting is the assumption that it could be answered, as in, there is a singular answer.
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Posted by The Dybbuk on "Who Are You?" by Salum
- "Such a bright view on a dark subject. Or is it a dark view on a bright subject? I can't seem to decide."
Posted by Twilight on "After We Die" by Salum
- "I wonder if we really are able to fly after we die. I always thought I had wings in another life, because Every night When I dream , I dream that I have wings, or that I can fly. "
Posted by Unknown on "After We Die" by Salum
- "was just beginning to enjoy this, but it seemed to end too abruptly... you should elaborate on it... it begs continuance. welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "All My Me's (extended)" by Salum
- "I agree with Kinki... winner! It blows me away sometimes when i can read a page of something and not get the same reaction from just a few lines..."
Posted by Devilish on "Metal Rose Petal" by Salum
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