Metal Rose Petal

By Salum

Masochistic    creeP
Emotions  set   freE
Time    is   a    treaT
Always   to   be      A
Loser meant to faiL

Sometimes I feel,
Like a metal rose petal…..

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Copyright 2011 Saberwolf
Published on Wednesday, August 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Salum On Friday, August 26, 2011, Salum (20)By person wrote:

    thank you all for your kind words. :)

  • dwells On Thursday, August 25, 2011, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    "Pedal to the metal" as they say, and full speed ahead!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, August 24, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    I agree with Kinki... winner! It blows me away sometimes when i can read a page of something and not get the same reaction from just a few lines... Scholar

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