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- "Of course, all in good fun my friend. Thank you taking the time for some feedback, much appreciated. I do recall a comment,but to where i have no idea. there should be some kind of notifyer that let's us know heh."
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "Hellhana The Harlot" by TyrantAvDetForbannet
- ""A moment of pleasure, to escape the mind/
A moment to surrender, your lips to mine" This was definitely my favorite like in the poem, I quite like the passionate nature, and the sense that its a pointless passion, and no matter how hard either tries, it can't be anything more."
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "Hellhana The Harlot" by TyrantAvDetForbannet
- "This is very dark. Very sensual (which you can do so well)....and just magnificent!! The last 4 lines really sent shivers down my back. Just excellent writing here. One of the best writes you've written. God, where i this coming from? You my friend, are progressing to a degree I don't fully even understand. Brava ty, brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Hellhana The Harlot" by TyrantAvDetForbannet
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