Devotion To Death
By TyrantAvDetForbannet
If i were to travel forgotten lands to see
the ruin, behind the path
i've paved
phantoms that guide the winds
illuminous
sparks that dare to whisper
in the night a dimmer dream
and
only myself,
to listen
to silence
to strum the strings i
feel
to bring the tone of air from steel
melody for forest to
hear
and only myself
to spin the spell of sound,
to enrapture such spirit
from shell, that used to host the living
haunting me to see again
the ways before me gone
deep down
under, and so very far
worshipping devils with my guitar
for this is the age that is among us
and you'll feel the distance
of my stare
and you'll hear the desperation in the winds
that
phantoms carry to tell
there is a dark poet that reads to
himself
there is a musician that plays to none
there is a traveler
that travels
to where one has tread
to where he plays his guitar
till he's dead
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Comments on "Devotion To Death"
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On Thursday, July 12, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
This is my favorites of yours so far. Has an etherial natural feel. Flows nicely and paints beautiful images :). - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
Nice work! I'm teaching myself how to play but I suck at it. Either way this was very orchestral like pretty epic
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A former member wrote:
Why dont you ever bring me! you know I love the woods and your accoustics! Great write, very talented.
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
that was sooo good
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On Monday, July 25, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I know I've told u this poem was amazing, but I just had to comment. Im with Mike. the last staza really brought it home, encasing the words with a dark and mysterious cloud. Perfect write!
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On Wednesday, December 14, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Hey thanks lady, your comments are always wanted for it's valuable insight.
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On Saturday, July 23, 2011, MikeShank1989
(92) wrote:
The last stanza had me shaking my head. What a superb write.
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Thanks mike i'm glad you enjoyed it.