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Hellhana The Harlot
By TyrantAvDetForbannet
Sweet Hellhanna, your alluring nature is blessed devotion...
( Moonlit against the shadows, in the halls of this castle )
Even though you kneel in heartless worship..
( Stoned
cold, Such hellish mane, That burns the blood within the viens )
My flesh have cracked underneath the surface
So now
i understand your purpose...
( For but a fracture of time would
hold your attention )
You were once a harlot from which
man confides
A moment of pleasure, to escape the mind
A moment
to surrender, your lips to mine
To fantasize, and complete my vission
( Sexual Release, even though I'm deceased )
Sweet
Hellhanna, How could you have been so loving
( Searching
for something that you never had )
Even though all that
you touch is all for nothing
( For it is true that lust is
just a form of wanting )
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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
Comments on "Hellhana The Harlot"
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On Friday, November 25, 2011, Mord
(35)
wrote:
Awww it's over? I want more .
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On Wednesday, December 14, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
I have alot of further writing on this now but no way to post it unless i uprgrade heh. It will happen sooner or later, be on the lookout.
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
More will come of Hellhana and her lust
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On Thursday, October 6, 2011, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
"A moment of pleasure, to escape the mind/ A moment to surrender, your lips to mine" This was definitely my favorite like in the poem, I quite like the passionate nature, and the sense that its a pointless passion, and no matter how hard either tries, it can't be anything more.
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On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Understanding the creative expressions of another is in sense advancing and evolving. thank you for the feedback!
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A former member wrote:
nice piece bro..the sense of incompleteness adds a spark to poetry.nicely done!
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On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Perhaps i'll try different angle in my next writing. Thanks for the feedback!
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
This is very dark. Very sensual (which you can do so well)....and just magnificent!! The last 4 lines really sent shivers down my back. Just excellent writing here. One of the best writes you've written. God, where i this coming from? You my friend, are progressing to a degree I don't fully even understand. Brava ty, brava!!
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On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Thank you for all your kind words!
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
tyrant, excellent peice. i love poetry about death and this is no exception. its very lovely! awesome! by the way tyrant i left you a comment about you and me and devilish, awhile back. i just wanted you to know shes like my best friend and i meant that in good fun. she wouldnt have it any other way! i love your work!
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On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Of course, all in good fun my friend. Thank you taking the time for some feedback, much appreciated. I do recall a comment,but to where i have no idea. there should be some kind of notifyer that let's us know heh.
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