Hellhana The Harlot

By TyrantAvDetForbannet


Sweet Hellhanna, your alluring nature is blessed devotion...

( Moonlit against the shadows, in the halls of this castle )

Even though you kneel in heartless worship..

( Stoned cold, Such hellish mane, That burns the blood within the viens )


My flesh have cracked underneath the surface
So now i understand your purpose...

( For but a fracture of time would hold your attention )


You were once a harlot from which man confides
A moment of pleasure, to escape the mind
A moment to surrender, your lips to mine
To fantasize, and complete my vission

( Sexual Release, even though I'm deceased )


Sweet Hellhanna, How could you have been so loving

( Searching for something that you never had )

Even though all that you touch is all for nothing

( For it is true that lust is just a form of wanting )

 

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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
Published on Wednesday, October 5, 2011.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Mord On Friday, November 25, 2011, Mord (35)By person wrote:

    Awww it's over? I want more .

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Wednesday, December 14, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    I have alot of further writing on this now but no way to post it unless i uprgrade heh. It will happen sooner or later, be on the lookout.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    More will come of Hellhana and her lust

  • Hands_Around_My_Throat On Thursday, October 6, 2011, Hands_Around_My_Throat (67)By person wrote:

    "A moment of pleasure, to escape the mind/ A moment to surrender, your lips to mine" This was definitely my favorite like in the poem, I quite like the passionate nature, and the sense that its a pointless passion, and no matter how hard either tries, it can't be anything more.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Understanding the creative expressions of another is in sense advancing and evolving. thank you for the feedback!

  • A former member wrote: nice piece bro..the sense of incompleteness adds a spark to poetry.nicely done!

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Perhaps i'll try different angle in my next writing. Thanks for the feedback!

  • Ladyhawke On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    This is very dark. Very sensual (which you can do so well)....and just magnificent!! The last 4 lines really sent shivers down my back. Just excellent writing here. One of the best writes you've written. God, where i this coming from? You my friend, are progressing to a degree I don't fully even understand. Brava ty, brava!!

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Thank you for all your kind words!

  • haunted On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    tyrant, excellent peice. i love poetry about death and this is no exception. its very lovely! awesome! by the way tyrant i left you a comment about you and me and devilish, awhile back. i just wanted you to know shes like my best friend and i meant that in good fun. she wouldnt have it any other way! i love your work!

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, October 6, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Of course, all in good fun my friend. Thank you taking the time for some feedback, much appreciated. I do recall a comment,but to where i have no idea. there should be some kind of notifyer that let's us know heh.

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