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- "It's what I do all the time. My anger is all trapped inside. One day, I'll break. I know I will. Let's hope that day will be far away though. I loved the wording, although spelling and grammar were a little out there, but for the rest, I loved it. It's not one of those over-complicated poems with tons of description. It's simple. The pauses you put between "breathe in" and "breathe out" and "1, 2, 3" also lets the reader understand how much patience is needed to control oneself. Very nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "my anger..." by the broken
- "Yup... I feel ya... Depression sucks... Another personal piece well spoken, ripping the raw emotions and splattering them across your page. Great job :) "
Posted by Symbol on "never " by the broken
- "No matter how mad we become, "sometimes" our anger doesn't seem to help in fights or anything really, it just blisters and seethes on the inside until it demands to be released. And it certainly does not help having people telling one to "breathe". If it does anything, it would just add to the rage. Cheers for the read :)"
Posted by Symbol on "my anger..." by the broken
- "A poem riddled with deep and long-suffering. It hurts to read such a sad thing, a thing that happens to lots of people... Take guts to share such a personal piece of yourself. Cheers and take care :)"
Posted by Symbol on "broken is a fool" by the broken
- "Sometimes getting someone to realize one's true colors can be impossible. I love the violence of what you'd do for love though, so many fav lines, I can't pick. Seriously powerfully worded piece. Cheers for the read. :)"
Posted by Symbol on "i am evil" by the broken
- "Some of our sufferings just simply cannot be "removed" or "numbed" by self-infliction so on... It seems incurable. It is the weight of our mistakes and loss, we have to bear with us... for a long time. This poem is riddled with such melancholy, it is heart-wrenching and strikes a chord. Thanks for sharing :) "
Posted by Symbol on "that child with the eyes fully black" by the broken
- "The horrors one has to face to erase what they see in their reflection, till they reach a breaking point, the conclusion being utterly awful... Nicely composed though, with rich raw emotions bursting through the seams of your words. Cheers for the read :)"
Posted by Symbol on "modern day bloodletting" by the broken
- "soullessness and just rudimentary. in my personal opinion anyone that says they are souless doesn't know the difference between right or wrong and should be put out of their misery because theyare a blight to society. But if that would happen I would be the first in line lol wonderful pen though. makes a person stop to think."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "self" by the broken
- "This is exactly how most murderers would think. Doing the world a justice to rid us all of somebody that is a liar, cheat, or just a piece of garbage in general. Awesome capture of a pycho's mind. "
Posted by Unknown on "letter from a killer" by the broken
- "cutting only shows your scars on the outside. I won't heal the once you put yourself through each and everyday. The key to happiness is being strong enough to forgive yourself. I was tortured as a child, I thought numberous times of taking a cut to the wrist. My scars are both inside and out. I couldn't stand the sympathetic looks from others. We are the hardest onto ourselves. There isn't a damn thing on this earth more distructive then the judgment of inside yourself.
Your poem made me stop for a moment and reflected how I am now compared to when I was younger, and I wouldn't change a damn thing because I made myself strong. Keep writing keep faith in the fact that you are strong enough to put pain into words. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "modern day bloodletting" by the broken
- "The euphoria is only the hypoxia created by lack of oxygen to your brain I do believe. It always gets harder around the holidays, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "modern day bloodletting" by the broken
- "I understand your pain, I am a perminate resident! lovely and dark just how I like them. by the way I read your profile, my husband suffers with social anxiety. If you decide to put the antisocialism on hold... I can lead a kickass shoulder :)"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "that child with the eyes fully black" by the broken
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