blood

By the broken

i can smell the blood
remember how it dripped
like a falling tear
from a blackend man
a blackend soul
never to know
never to feel
always to remember the pain of that steel

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Monday, May 9, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Killerdemonchick On Sunday, November 25, 2012, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    great write

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    It's something about blood that always catches my attention... I like that! Scholar

  • suicidalsecrecy On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (43)By person wrote:

    w.o.w Great work.

  • A former member wrote: AMAZING!! Loved it.


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