Comments by All Members
- "This gave me a bit of clarity. I enjoyed this because it was haunting and expressive. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Faces" by SulaMoon
- "I have a special thing for nightmares: I am specially good at remembering any dream. All of them, really. It's a curse and a blessing... and you've captured it very well. Good write!"
Posted by Nimue44 on "Insomnia" by SulaMoon
- "My friend suffers from this, but she can't write it like you did, great write ! and helped me understand my friends pain a little better, thank you."
Posted by alex herewane on "Sweet Relief" by SulaMoon
- "No ! you are not dumb. Your words are that of a gifted but tormented soul. If you are as amazing as your words; you'll find a way to make your life meaningful again. You are an amazing, talented and marvelous woman. I wish all the happiness in the world to you."
Posted by Dark Valkyrie on "Faces" by SulaMoon
- "Wow. I've lived through this as well, so it hits home. I always thought I was strong. I was wrong. I'm glad you escaped the demon that was pursuing you"
Posted by ANGELSLAYER on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "A true friend within yourself? The only true mate... yes I see. He or she is as shy as you are. You have to invite her or him gently, with love.
Thank you,
Pavel"
Posted by Unknown on "True Friend" by SulaMoon
- "A poem that really took my breath away...Tenderness and sincerity make it that powerful I think..Thanks for sharing."
Posted by tindomerel on "A Wish" by SulaMoon
- "Thanks :) Yeah, the worst is behind me...trust me. No despair any more. Just getting it out on paper so I can heal even further."
Posted by SulaMoon on "Faces" by SulaMoon
- "Some times these flash backs come out of no where, but to die is something else. It seems like you're really going through some hard times or the worst has come and gone I hope. Do not let others put you down, "nothing I do is ever good enough" maybe not to them, but if you tried, really tried, that's good enough for me, I don't care what anyone else thinks. Take care of yourself and try not to dwell in this place you wrote of, thank you for sharing, I know this piece took alot out of you.
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Posted by Gray Vision on "Faces" by SulaMoon
- "You have a lot of unique descriptors, and jolts in syntax to keep the reader on their guard. Well written. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "The line I wish I had written is the penultimate line: "Wish I wasn't in today". It is a beautifully underplayed but truly chilling line. "
Posted by Unknown on "Faces" by SulaMoon
- "Thank you, everyone. I suffer from sever Fybromialgia, caused by numerous accidents, abusive relationships, etc..., and the pain gets so bad that I can't stand it. When I was on a 3 day excruciating pain trip, I wrote this. The repeated mantra going through my head. I hope that no one has to go through anything like this."
Posted by SulaMoon on "Sweet Relief" by SulaMoon
- "To alleviate your concerns, I see nothing in this that might be taken from my work. though the overall tone reminds me heavily of "A plea to old soldiers, and the young alike." or "An ode to war" just tone, no worries of plagiarism."
Posted by Winter Born on "PTSD" by SulaMoon
- "That's beautiful Sula, enjoy the small things in life beacuse one day when you look back at them, they might have been big things. I think you've come to terms with this, thank you for sharing =)
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Posted by Gray Vision on "From the depths" by SulaMoon
- "I've always been strong willed, something that most of my friends don't understand. This peice has inspired me to write something new that I'll surely post in time. Thanks for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "For my family, it is alcohol. It's consumed both my brothers. But it can be any addiction, for me it is still cigarettes (which my son gets on me all the time). Like the dragon's smoke. Alcohol, like the peaceful lake. Or the bayonet, heroin. It can even be food, caffeine or cocaine. Almost everyone is addicted to something."
Posted by SulaMoon on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "whatever the drug...addiction is a state of mind...it can be beaten with strength of will...like...spiritual immunity...but...as you say...run!...prevention is better than the cure...thanks for posting "
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "markus could be right, but i think cocaine....
but whatever the monster, you have the right attitude; avoid at all costs.
well expressed.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
- "Good little write that could be a metaphor for many things... I was thinking meth. But like I said, this write can mean many a different monster. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Beast" by SulaMoon
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