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- "you comment means alot to me. the poem is a true account of the loss of the love of my life. "He Was" is another poem about him. your words brought me comfort... thank u so much for the love :)"
Posted by XOCHITL on "MONSTER COCAINE" by XOCHITL
- "Ok so my phone is acting stupid so I can't rate it!! I'll try again later... I'll be coming back to read this piece many times along with your other works :)"
Posted by Unknown on "MONSTER COCAINE" by XOCHITL
- "I had just logged out when I seen this poem on the new works list... I HAD to read it.. I was an addict myself at on time... Monster is probably the best way to describe "white girl" she is a bitch and ruiner of lives... I luckily got away from her but its very hard to break an addiction like that... and sometimes even when you love someone if they are an addict the best thing you could do for them is give up...it might make them relize what they really need in life and if it doesn't make them relize then you are better off without them. This write really spoje to me and its times like this I wish I had more room for faves... you get a 10 from me beautifully flow and nicely penned! Thank you for sharing (sorry for rambling)!"
Posted by Unknown on "MONSTER COCAINE" by XOCHITL
- "Really good work, the sudden realisation that it was your lover holding you under, great stuff. Write on."
Posted by Unknown on "NO MORE" by XOCHITL
- "I love this! the line about only having a few Breaths left is great. I hope this gave you some release. i know my best works come from when i need to get something out."
Posted by Unknown on "NO MORE" by XOCHITL
- "i never want to stop reading this. you are freaking amazing. this is indeed a beautiful devastation. a glorified horror. delicious. amazing. i don't have the words to describe it! love love LOVED it :)"
Posted by Unknown on "BED OF SILK AND SHADOW" by XOCHITL
- "Wow! Beautiful! Addiction can cut deeply, and those that are in that "pit" don't realize that they are hurting anyone, even if you tell them. Great write! p.s. You did the right thing in letting him go. You're child is more important!"
Posted by SulaMoon on "HE WAS" by XOCHITL
- "this definitely reminds me of the state of mind we can all fall into....but from what ive seen from u ur worth much, much more than you probably even give yourself credit for. another expressive and beautifully crafted write, write on :) God bless "
Posted by Unknown on "My reality" by XOCHITL
- "amazing write...u just keep writing the poetry and never let anyone try to stop u from writing it! sometimes i wish i could take a good look at myself from the outside 2...very unique thing to write about :) write on! "
Posted by Unknown on "Life giving fund" by XOCHITL
- ""when you touch me I wither
when you touch me I grow", that line was amazing, and this is very very heartfelt, honest poems are always the best to read since you get the most out of them...XD thank you for another awesome write XD"
Posted by Unknown on "WHEN YOU TOUCH ME" by XOCHITL
- "i agree with gray vision, very very refreshing poem :) the idea of the box being next to hers is definitely a very original way to express that your never alone...this was very sweet and expressive, awesome write my friend :) ill be looking forward to more of them XD"
Posted by Unknown on "THE BOX" by XOCHITL
- "beautiful beautiful write...sigh* yes, addiction is a horrible horrible thing...just know Jesus could change people at any time, just pray and wait on the Lord. this is a poem to remember."
Posted by Unknown on "HE WAS" by XOCHITL
- "Addiction is a nasty thing. It can chew u up and spit u out. Unfortunatly not all of us are blessed with someone willing to stand by through the ups and downs- maybe my pain is enough reality to change one life, one family, or one man... One day at a time. Dedicated to my sons father: may God lead u to water and u drink."
Posted by XOCHITL on "HE WAS" by XOCHITL
- "I'm glad you found us on here, I've heard it from many that poetry has saved them which I think could very well be your case. Thank you for everything you've shared with us thus far. Take care and keep writing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "WHEN YOU TOUCH ME" by XOCHITL
- "This is the place to release all, everything that you feel, it's a purge, and when you're al done we'll all still be here. Thank you for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My reality" by XOCHITL
- "This is beautiful, a sad beginning but ended with some hope, refreshing. Thank you for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "THE BOX" by XOCHITL
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