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"I must say that this is a very thrilling piece which drags you down the verse. It is so simple yet hints at the true struggle which breathes right below the depths. A struggle which feels as if it reaches out from the page."
Posted by nightshade on "a boy [a story]" by pessum ire animus

"enjoyment to read..you depicted the feeling quiet well..good job ^^"
Posted by Shortnlethal on "Fatal Attraction" by pessum ire animus

"this is wonderful. it gives a feeling of a love thats wanted but out of reach. its a good write. =]"
Posted by Unknown on "Fatal Attraction" by pessum ire animus

"the rhyming scheme was weaker in the middle, but you picked it up again at the end."
Posted by Unknown on "Love is..." by pessum ire animus

"I... will go ahead and disagree, though this was well written, Love in itself offers no failings.. it is the weak of heart that fail. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Love is..." by pessum ire animus

"you can feel the emotion put into it. and i know two brotheres who this story can relate to. it was a pleasure to read this. -Kat"
Posted by Unknown on "a boy [a story]" by pessum ire animus

"i loved this. awesome write! ~V~"
Posted by void on "Love is..." by pessum ire animus

"Jared i can't thank you enough for how you've continued to be here for me. :::HUG::: i am eternally grateful. ti amo. "
Posted by Sky Singer on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"Well damn.. this sawed me in half then shredded me like paper.. I've felt like this to towards people and it just.. bah, I don't know. you've just said it perfectly. Beautiful write.."
Posted by Lynaes on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"simply put, elegent and heartbreaking. well done, bro. A_C"
Posted by Alacer_Cogitatus on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"Wonderful. It makes me want to cry. Just simply beautiful"
Posted by Cutting_for_Freedom on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"aching and tearing with such beautiful sentiments that read so smoothly....great write"
Posted by NikesRain on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"Absolutely wonderful...*tear*...someone should know how fortunate they are to have you around and do what you do "do." Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"This is brilliant. . like my good friend crimson said, If only we could do more for what/who we care about. . .love it"
Posted by CrOsSeD N BoUnD on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"heartwrenching write...we all wish we could do everything in our power..great write..~AoD"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "(If Only I) Could Do More" by pessum ire animus

"enchanting. divine in all sense and to all senses. i love."
Posted by Unknown on "elder in infancy" by pessum ire animus

"wonderfull.. could be a great song.. nothing much to say. just good job :O)"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "elder in infancy" by pessum ire animus

"love the last stanza, a punch in the gut...awesome write, again. -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "a boy [a story]" by pessum ire animus

"I'll second that. Keep your head down."
Posted by DarkPoet on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"Wonderful. I loved It! BTW, to all who dont know, Im the brother. thanks for all. A_C"
Posted by Alacer_Cogitatus on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"_excellent...love is so many things...way more complicated than it should be...very nice.i like this alot.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Love is..." by pessum ire animus

"awww I'm really sorry...BIG HUG hun."
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"::hugs:: you know you can call me when you need to. ti amo"
Posted by Sky Singer on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"Well done, enjoyed the read. and my sympathies to you and your brother, hope everything turns out alright.~~~Grave"
Posted by WinterGrave on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"outstanding. don't we all have somebody over there who we know? for how great and free America is, it sure has gone downhill in the last eighty years."
Posted by Unknown on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"Yeah good ol' glory eh. I feel sorry for the people over there, my best regards to for your brother. I sincerely hope he gets out alright, along with everyone else in the service. +T.P.U+"
Posted by Unknown on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"the imagery here isn't sad that such despicable people make it into office and how we fight each other because our opinions are right and everyone elses is wrong to the point of ultimate genocide? ~night~"
Posted by nightshade on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

"oh what a pian that must be and i love the style you have*takes style from pessum tries it on and gives it back cause it won't fit* ok well i still like your style and i really love"
Posted by nightshade on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus

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