Comments by All Members
- "Masks is what people see all the time. Maybe that's what we're afraid of. The silence that's between every tic tac. The distance between your nose and your mask."
Posted by Nimue44 on "All is dust" by silentninja
- "An enjoyable read on such a lovely canvas. Short but leaves on a cliffhanger, making you want more. Keep writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Echo's" by silentninja
- "Hey there have hope. Remember this, though you have it bad, dont be to sad. There is some out there in the cold on a wet cardboard boxes and their covers are trash bags. I have seen them, some call them homeless bums. If they could have one wish, you know what it would be ? ? .... pause..... not a house, not a car, not even a bed, they would wish to know where their next meal was going to come from. So, not saying that you dont have it bad bro, but just remember someone out there has it worse than you. So knowing that, should comfort you some, to know others have it bad too."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm Falling Apart" by silentninja
- "skirting the edge of disaster //
dancing on the razors edge //
i ride the chaos while i want to //
and longer still besides //
we all have drama waiting //
and perhapse love finds us //
on the other side .."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "I'm Falling Apart" by silentninja
- "The silence, the loneliness, can rip a person's will to tatters. We are only left to realize the empty nothingness of this cold world, awaiting a seemingly nonexistent embrace from love. Thanx for sharing, I relate to this all too well :]"
Posted by Void Vortex on "I'm Falling Apart" by silentninja
- "I read this last night and since I am not the best commentator I decided to mull it over for while...It stayed with me all night...so defeated and scared but utterly beautiful...well done."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "I'm Falling Apart" by silentninja
- "I know exactly what this feeling feels like... it's how I feel now. I love this poem and how you captured every feeling and what its like to now know what to do. I love everything about this. Excellent job."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm Falling Apart" by silentninja
- "I find it so normal to relate to this. Does this scare people... I don't really care. All I know is, you described the destructive chaos hauntingly dark! Much enjoyed!"
Posted by Void Vortex on "No one can hear me scream" by silentninja
- "Such a beautiful poem....all these words of deep bitterness and pure acrimonity keep reappearing everywhere, all the time, like it does in the mind of a melancholically deranged soul......beautifully penned....your words are true and raw"
Posted by Unknown on "No one can hear me scream" by silentninja
- "haha ... I just read this as it was passing by the front page ..." Only one person call tell me, and your the one
When I close the door, does the light stay on?" ... lol...that's precious .. thanks Ninja :)
"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Fridge" by silentninja
- "Beautiful! I love how it seems a bit sad at the beginning, and then slowly turns macabre as the scene is slowly being unveiled to show an unsettling backstory. Good work. Really good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Two hundred and twenty one" by silentninja
- "yea, and probably a bad idea on a date as well, I'd imagine :P I caught this piece on the featured works list and got a laugh. thank you."
Posted by Patches on "Mr Flatulance" by silentninja
[Next]
