Comments by All Members
- "Damn monkey I've read this one about 20 times now and I'm still boggled but I definitely enjoyed the read every time. Maybe it's just about teaching someone else from your own mistakes but there's got to be more to it. Hmmm"
Posted by sole on "Scholars lore." by Dancing_Monkey
- "My banana boy, i LOVE how you make a person really work for the meaning behind your words. This was wonderful (as always). ~Your dp Pixie~"
Posted by Drea on "Scholars lore." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Mmm. So many lines sort of whisper to me . . and as always I feel like I could read this write 100 times and find something new each time .. and you know, that's no small feat especially with such a concise write. Very nice job."
Posted by cre on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""Clouds do gather, be they blackend or not "...brilliant!i equate your work to that of a surgeon;everything is done for a reason. with pin point precision,too.most excellent!~season"
Posted by suicideseason on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "awesome peter, i can see you maturing more and more, not only as a writer but as a man in itself. your sense of feel interests me, nice work here"
Posted by _Andrew_ on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "To me, this poem is about not having anything handed to you. You can inherit alot of things, but the one thing you can't is the experience that living life brings. Nice poem I enjoyed it."
Posted by sole on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "wow monk....this was a brick-in-the-face poem...smacks ya and all you can do is sit there in the sting of it for a few moments..I swear you get better and better with each sentence you write..Loved it...* 4 snaps..and a twirl on one foot* "
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "It's hard to open up after you've been pushed down so many times. But this is true...you must first experience to learn. It's just the getting over the fear of experiencing things that's the hard part..."
Posted by Unknown on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Yeah...he always comes across sounding intelligent doesn't he? *sigh* Will you settle for my unintelligent "Good write"? This is incredible..."
Posted by Unknown on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Peter~
This is a very deep poem. i like it... and i also like the way you write your poems in general. keep it up with your style and you'll soon be famous! lol but it is a beautifully written and deep poem
~forever hiding in the shadows~
Amber"
Posted by Mischevious Princess on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "!!!Urban!!! your such a fucking maniac. I realy like you for saying that. Shit I cant believe you just said that!!! Well I wont comment now. *jumping in Urbans boat* woot...there.. Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
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