Comments by All Members
- "_Peter,awesome." the drumstick breach"...i love that. your way with wording blows me away.this was beautiful.you really make me think.much love.:)"
Posted by suicideseason on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Absolutely enchanting.. the wording and flow so dreamy and hypnotic, my favourite lines are "Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin One day flawless passed before me, the scent of dawn Static insomnia, the scar to seal." absolutely beautiful, stunning. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "holy shit, my jay dropped and i drop kicked it into a jabberjaw...so good, and slight alliteration, im a sucker for that, amazing, like always my denamrkian brother"
Posted by Clementine on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""Sleeping on the shores of my symbol"...*sigh*...that just pulled me in and sent me meandering along the rest. Nice work."
Posted by NikesRain on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Static insomnia, the scar to seal... what a great line... what a great piece. Aww, man, you are just full of greatness. :) :::OLd -bananas and pixie dust for us. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "A weak mind would see it doubt where a mature would see it total dedication. Something that I think is maybe the most obvius yet hardest thing to get to know about you. Very cool. Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Ow pretty strong words. I am happy for you, yet you have a way of making it sounds as a fear, instead of beauty. Actualy both in one, making it as honest in fear and in love. But still totaly rock like firm as the static it is. "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin-i am embarrassed to see that a non native english speaker can write much better than me ;) I agree with anth, your work has it's own signature monkeyness to it, ver original...always a pleasure
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Posted by girlafraid on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Whatfor this smile upon my face as i dazed in the dappled dawn of your words... Can't help but grin dumbly at this monkey, and that in itself is a compliment :)"
Posted by Solace on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "this is just excellence,one ill read again and again,better than pulse even..very cool work,so much meaning originality and style i love this work!"
Posted by Anth on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" I love that. Short but far from simple. Good write. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "As is usually the case, I don't know what the hell you're talking about, but the feelings it creates seem to make sense. Does that make sense? Nothing makes sense. Enyway, great as usual, Monkeyman ;)"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- ""beat poetry" at it's best! DM kicks ass once again... nicely done, my friend, nicely done!"
Posted by worm on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Yes god damnit, stupid fish that wants to swallow, you hold more inside without, but also with; There all the power to the ones that look futher then a gathering *raising a hand* Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "well done peter, i like how you weaved this small piece and i especially love how it closed as well; leaves me with a sense of compassion."
Posted by _Andrew_ on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "...I can't believe you ever thought of giving up writing...this is..just..brilliant...What the hell took me so long to read this?!..Cara..xxx..."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Im slow...and stupid..and,well..blonde (if that counts as any excuse),and so i still haven't read most of your new work...but this was the most pefect way to re-introduce myself to your work..."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "This is one of those poems where the sentences are in them self perfect and with eachother create a collage of many thoughts in one. Everytime I read it I believe to have found the REAL meaning and everytime am I convinced I was wrong. Intriguing and bril"
Posted by Storm on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "*slap* you crazy monkey, you...Few capture my attention these days...I've become an elitist in the halls of Dp, refusing to dole out my time to any who i dont appreciate...You have my time :)"
Posted by Solace on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- ""You gave to withdraw" "New age has begone" "Mold my inner ryhme" Stuck with these phrases, these reference points to satiate my desire for something more than mundane, something profound..."
Posted by Solace on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "_Peter,this gave me goosebumps..."mold my inner rhyme.the beat in bloom" really spoke to me.i'm sorry...as always,you have left me wordless.thankyou.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
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