Comments by All Members
- "Man, this is bloody wonderful. Like a witty and personal diary entry with fantastic conversational tone. Richly deserved POTD."
Posted by carlosjackal on "logophiliac" by Liz
- "ah yeah, I remember this... probing so many abandoned words in these halls... whatever happened to the mind from which they sprang... on a side note, it never ceases to amaze me how I can return to old comments and see little books after them... heh. comical. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "What happens when a dark poet dies?" by Liz
- "...shattering fisfuls of sorrow in your poem. to imagine anyone, any human, fragile as a butterfly, emerging from the cocoon, so disabled..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "flawed metamorphosis" by Liz
- ""the condom I left in the trashcan
[to punish myself]" - fantastic beginning to an excellent piece on self-loathing behavior. Loved the flow and imagery throughout! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "flawed metamorphosis" by Liz
- "so many times I've sat perusing post from 8 years ago or so... some with a note... I know this sucks, I'll be back tomorrow to fix it... and I wonder just how life lived em away. thanks... what does happen?"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "What happens when a dark poet dies?" by Liz
- "breathe to the beat
of windshield wipers,
or stop, with the whispers
of nothing ever again.
.. oh my god. the last line killed me. wow. this took my breath away.."
Posted by Devilish on "wreckage" by Liz
- "oh this is wonderful.. it's no secret that i'm no good really, at commeting.. but I wanted to make it known that i'd read this and found it beautiful, moving. it's lovely to see you posting. you've bought a smile to an otherwise pretty shoddy day. :) xxx"
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Phoenix" by Liz
- "love the alliterative vintage and vinegar; soemthing old and older.. .. .. and succinct fire of strength and desperation of sorts. .. . excellent personal intimate little poetic."
Posted by Unknown on "Phoenix" by Liz
- "The first stanza cracks me up... it's so matter of fact. the elephant... stepped on my face. and from there into the glorious sunlight. good job liz."
Posted by Unknown on "flawed metamorphosis" by Liz
- "hmm. It's an interesting idea. I'm not sure what I think about the concept, but I really like the piece. "
Posted by Unknown on "reBoot" by Liz
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