Comments by All Members
- "thank you for the poem. I know it doesn't say it's for me but I know it is... I see the parallels, posted on my birthday. thank you. "
Posted by Cassette on "Birthday Myth" by Doomy_One
- "...surrounded by pain & misery & more pain & no way to escape...you need something stronger than nyquil..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Putrid" by Doomy_One
- "Alas, that exactly mirrors my thoughts many a night..
Great write, my friend. Keep them coming =]"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Putrid" by Doomy_One
- "I stumble upon lots of good poetry on here. This is one that I can appreciate. It's intense with a hint of sorrow from the last line for some reason. I read irony and even sarcasm, and this is why I like dark poetry. It holds nothing back and invokes the beast within. Great work!! Keep writing."
Posted by Mona on "Birthday Myth" by Doomy_One
- "This was superbly presented and developed. Really enjoyed the mental gymnastics and the similes. So very well done, thanks, and welcome to DP! Feel free to roam and comment."
Posted by dwells on "Three Sisters" by Doomy_One
- "i really enjoyed this piece in its sort of morbid, pessimistic eccentricity. love the lines about the grass, what a vibrant image. "
Posted by Unknown on "Reread Curses" by Doomy_One
- "a very sad, deep, aching piece that left me looking at myself in a new light.
thanks for the view. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "fragile" by Doomy_One
- "the hunter and the hunted...sometimes it feels like that...'time is made to kill'...great last line...remember to grasp it firmly when you have time on your hands...and when time stands still..enjoy..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "New World Rat" by Doomy_One
- "I completely adore how the words of this art appreciate one another. Well done my friend... Well done. The whole theme is entirely up my alley."
Posted by Unknown on "Nothing Holy" by Doomy_One
- "a stunning write from beginning to end.. .. ." i ran three thousand miles and talked to a hundred other women and scorched my soul and drowned my thoughts and worked to exhaustion and still the last waking image before me is her"......the absolute brazen truth of love and still loving despite the loss.......amasing verse."
Posted by Unknown on "Mist" by Doomy_One
- "i found this quite bruising and quite clearly understated in its immensity; 'we stopped saying "i love you" when we actually started meaning it'......and despite its slight hurtful quality, there was a ink.ling of hope attached to the pen.. . .. love these honest writes. "
Posted by Unknown on "Stirred and Spun" by Doomy_One
- "run!!!... you can always tell a good piece... 3 lines that say so damn much... great stuff, write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Senryu" by Doomy_One
- "Ambrosial and cherry....love that ... really quite and very ... I like the way that you write ..
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Posted by Corinthian on "Ignore Me." by Doomy_One
- "ahh how much I can relate to this today , when we are soo hurt its hard to stop I suppose ..very nice write ..ps..I have that very same shirt =D"
Posted by Corinthian on "Senryu" by Doomy_One
- "love the title...a rich heady brew...perhaps something new and wonderful will grow from it...~paddles on in canoe~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Compost" by Doomy_One
- "Gosh I gotta agree with both Raskal and Foster on this one, genious man, carry on brother =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "fragile" by Doomy_One
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