Comments by All Members
- "Very nice, I like the imagery you used in the first and last lines, it's the kind of thing that keeps me reading. Thanks for the nice write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "Wonderful poem. Loved it how you put the season view into it with the burning leaves. Loved it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "i had a friend of mine try to tell me once that innocence doesn't exist -- that it's "just a method to explain the nature of children"... i think he's dead wrong.... innocence is indeed a most precious gift... my heart breaks to see it thown away, especia"
Posted by Sky Singer on "The Stealing of Innocence." by DarkAyla
- "i LOVE IT!! its going in my favorites. it just screams everything i have ever thought about a certain ex friend of mine. Thank you for writting this. ~Drea~ dtw i nowk hatw ouy rea ayings lol"
Posted by Drea on "Stupid Bitch." by DarkAyla
- "... your assumptions flare dissent among the masses ... see what careless words create? ... ~L"
Posted by Loneal on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "i lov the uter hatred in this! yes let the fucking emotion flow! this is what poetry is all about! nice write and great job. -trowa"
Posted by trowasrevolution on "Stupid Bitch." by DarkAyla
- "ever used words like ashes and bleeding and autumn? I have another that uses similar words from months ago. This is something serious you're accusing me of, and you better be able to back yourself up before you do it again."
Posted by cre on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "Please do not spread lies about me. I had not even read this write when I wrote mine, and I am pretty sure everyone here knows I don't steal work. Now that I've read this one, they aren't even about the same thing. You think this is the first poem that ev"
Posted by cre on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "wow i definately know how you feel. yeah i've been down this road before and i know its heartwernching. i wish i could do more for ya, but just know i feel for ya. -trowa"
Posted by trowasrevolution on "Why?" by DarkAyla
- "Since I feel bad your poem was ripped off by cre, I'll give you another comment... this work is original, beautiful, and inspirational. Every image is masterfully put together, and everyone should read this and learn from it (NOT steal it)!"
Posted by morgue_white on "Autumn Rain." by DarkAyla
- "i ontd nowk, i od hinkt a ewf illw nowk, aybem heyt anc oinj het unf! NYONEA HOW NOWSK HATW HET ELLH EREW AYINSS< AYS OMETHINGS ACKB!"
Posted by DarkAyla on "Stupid Bitch." by DarkAyla
- "robablyp otn, ellw, aybem a ewf, utb ostm ontw eb blea ot ecipherd hist, i on'td hinkt. ellw, veryonee? anc ouy?"
Posted by morgue_white on "Stupid Bitch." by DarkAyla
- "maybe there are feelings here that you don't want to admit or maybe you have admitted them and now you wish you could take them back, "
Posted by Ophelia on "Why?" by DarkAyla
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