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Damn Bridge. (it looked so pretty)
By DarkAyla
So high up.
So far away.
No one should hear
Me scream up here.
The wind blows
Through my hair.
I enjoy the very
Last breathes i have
Before my lungs are
Invaded by cold dark
Waters below me.
I lift my arms up high.
I wonder how long I can balance.
I dreamed of falling for so long.
Now the moment is near.
Within my reach.
I could just step out and
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Copyright 2003 DarkAyla
Published on Saturday, August 16, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Damn Bridge. (it looked so pretty)"
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On Friday, April 22, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
amazing, i felt like i was right there watching. Of course I wouldnt have let you fall. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Monday, August 18, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
i like this... i like the idea that in grabbing it, you're gone... falling and flying feel the same until you hit the ground.
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
well hun, I didn't need the explanation you gave, everything you said was exactly as you meant it to be, good poem *~seraph~*
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, DarkAyla
(51) wrote:
The story is the "damn" bridge lured me on top and told me to jump off. oh and the stars n stuff are me falling!
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