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Drowning.
By DarkAyla
The look in your eyes.
What are you doing here?
The smile on your face.
Get off of me!
Underwater ripples blur.
Can't breathe.
My heart drops into my lungs.
Can't scream!
Your hands clenching my throat.
Can't breathe.
Struggling to break free.
Someone help
me.
You look down at me.
I can't see anything.
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Copyright 2003 DarkAyla
Published on Saturday, August 16, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Demosthenes
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wrote:
lovely write. not stupid. different. unique. really good. -B
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On Monday, August 18, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i love it. i love all your work. i think you are a great writer.. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
Very open...open to emotion...I like it
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, DarkAyla
(51) wrote:
Kinda stupid i know....just something i felt like writing...
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
I didn't think it was stupid, rather spoke volumes, in my opinion. ~ Walk in Harmony ~ mw
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