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Corridor Of Awakening.
By DarkAyla
Follow me through these halls,
Flooded by daylight.
Happy memories on the walls,
You're a fool if you believe those lies.
Follow me nearer
As I lure you into darkness.
Flooded with cold, blue waters.
Red roses dropped for the dead.
Do you see it yet?
Do you understand
What lies beneath these waters.
The truth, the death, the cold loneliness.
Try not to close your eyes and turn away.
Despite all of your denial.
Try to understand I am giving you this.
You'll have to take it as it is.
I see you're shivering.
Does this scare you?
It scared me too.
I'm in your reflection
I am apart of you.
You can scream, you can cry.
But things will never be the same.
I am giving you the cold truth.
What you know, but won't admit.
I am your mind telling you to WAKE UP!
Thanx to Fallen Angel for the great new title!
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Copyright 2003 DarkAyla
Published on Wednesday, August 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Corridor Of Awakening."
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A former member wrote:
This poem spoke to me in its own way... thank you for writing such a great poem!
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, nell
(271)
wrote:
this gives me shivers, excellent write
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, pessum ire animus
(57) wrote:
this is amazing. excellent write.
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, DarkAyla
(52) wrote:
Now i would like some comments
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, DarkAyla
(52) wrote:
I can use it right?
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, DarkAyla
(52) wrote:
Hey, thats actually a good one, thanx
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Corridor of Awakening sounds like a nice title if you're really looking for an opinion...but this is they way it was written, the title cxplains the story so much more
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, DarkAyla
(52) wrote:
you got a better title? I just made something up really quick.
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