Comments by All Members
- "callin' the sun down, the diamonds... the search for solace... the tone is regal, the lexical selection: classically applied, the subject, eternally relevant... "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Still, I Wake." by TheProphetUntold
- "I never really know what to say to you...I mean...the fact that you find me to be any type of inspiration at all...just flooring.You are the heaviest of metal,what is orgasmic about the written word..I am just very proud,little brother.You are always a homerun.
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Posted by Honey on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold
- "this is a rare blossom from you ... why do I picture you in an English sports car with the top down , flying goggles and a scarf blowing in the wind? ... haha ... I should take advantage of your bonhomie and grab a picnic basket ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Asphalt and Lemonade." by TheProphetUntold
- "You describe my summer drives, those days when the Sun shines bright enough to cast my darkest shadow. It's a time for making lemonade outta lemons, when it feels so goddamn good to be filled with the blackest evil. "
Posted by Unknown on "Asphalt and Lemonade." by TheProphetUntold
- "If anyone is a master of describing the world as a thimble its you. how you can fit such an expansive array of images into a handful of words i will never understand."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Asphalt and Lemonade." by TheProphetUntold
- "There is nothing like quiet. The sounds of wind and rain and the musicks of life are of their own worlds, but quiet holds its own. Long have I searched for that quiet. "
Posted by Unknown on "Quiet, Just Quiet." by TheProphetUntold
- "Of all sparse poems I've read thus far, this says the most with the least words. This life of which you speak, moments raped of the joy that should have been, the green which was cold and brown inside, the heat too hot for skin...this moves me so."
Posted by Unknown on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold
- "Reminds me of childhood torments...this is what real poetry looks like. I loved that the rhyme scheme never felt forced, the narrative was never altered to feel scattered or inconsistent. This is the type of poetry I can only aspire to write someday. Well done, sir."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold
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