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  • "...captivating images. ongoing war. mercy of soldiers, cold as the weather..."
    Posted by FadedBlues on "Im Osten" by Eisen
  • "beautiful descriptions, you could expand on this forever. i feel the temperature in your words and depth in my imagination. you are an awesome writer."
    Posted by Unknown on "Season Song" by Eisen
  • "wow this is amazing!!! it flows so great and the words moved me to my core. keep up the good work that's a 10! "
    Posted by Unknown on "Reaper" by Eisen
  • "Haven't heard of the Homunculi in many moons - great word! And barbecued angel wings are great when deep fried; extra crispy - or so I hear. This was a fantastic write but since I don't know Halo there is a gap between knowledge (mine) and imagination (yours) - nevertheless well done and much enjoyed, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Dust and Echoes" by Eisen
  • ""If I am going to be drowned--if I am going to be drowned--if I am going to be drowned, why, in the name of the seven mad gods who rule the sea, was I allowed to come thus far and contemplate sand and trees?" -Stephen Crane, The Open Boat. Your words here sparked a recollection of this story. It seems such an act of betrayal when friends become strangers, when the world draws us into different directions. May there always be wind in your sails from worthy companionship...... and may your morality ever be a guiding star. "
    Posted by Feral on "Stranger than Death" by Eisen
  • "There was once a field, the third i'd known. One chair sat in the middle. When it rained the Sometimes Pond appeared, designed by those same frogs and dragonflies of every hue, picked at by red and blue birds whose nests were picked at by my Hawks. The Clockwork Deer ran the pack, answering only to the coyote. I've rarely felt so alive."
    Posted by Unknown on "The Fruit of the Fallen" by Eisen
  • "interesting and thoughtful...i like the epiphany and realizing of how little we know in the scope of eternity, but the great acceptance and peace you've illustrated. thanks for sharing"
    Posted by mastadave2999 on "Eternity" by Eisen
  • "I know nothing of it, either, sir, but you've crafted an uplifting piece. This is like the first warm breeze of the year for me. Terrific rhyme & rhythm."
    Posted by Unknown on "Eternity" by Eisen
  • "So many wars we fight for just a scrap of peace. It's sad that we have to cry ruby tears and work ourselves to death for it. But atleast you found yours. Nice write"
    Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "The Fruit of the Fallen" by Eisen
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