Comments by All Members
- "As good as you are to me, I would know this piece is yours even if it were anonymous. Your writing is the equivalent of you rendered into speech. Intelligence, wisdom, patience, compassion, empathy, and selflessness reaches out and smacks the humanity in me and reminds me that it is still there. This piece, as do your others, makes me feel like a person again when I read them. You express, with effortless skill and straightforward honesty, the plain and simple of it. You might finish last with those who haven't lived long enough to know the value and rarity of a good guy right now, you're young and unfortunately it sometimes takes a while for people to realize, but you finish first in my book. I adore you and your writing, my friend. Anyone else that doesn't yet, will. Beautiful write."
Posted by Amaryllis on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
- "Ya I hope not, even so though when I decided to write this, it was to capture a moment. It was jsut the frist time that my teacher had been this quiet, I don't know if she was reflecting on something at the time, but she was just so quiet. Thank you for dropping by =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Silence" by Gray Vision
- "Sorry to hear natalie, one of your dogs? How many do you have? Anyways Thank you for dropping by I know it must have been tough. You just gave me an idea for a new piece, I'll see what I can do. You take care now =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Finality" by Gray Vision
- "Yes it is ES beautiful and a bit scary, some times I don't even know why I do some of the things I do, all because of that very word. I've been told that I give way to much and I need to just be mean or not care at times. The thing is I don't know how to really, it's just not part of me to be like that so it can be hard at times. Thank you for your insigt on this peice =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
- "Thank you Thyyic, look at you, I met you not to long ago and you're coming along so fast your self as a poet. Thank you so much for all your kind words and insight, I hope all is well on your end and thanks again for dropping by =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
- "I know what you mean wolfy, you and me alike, it's true what they say it seems, "the good guys always finish last," but you know what, I wouldn't want it any other way. Take care of yourself =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
- "Perhaps I've done too much, I hit my limit again lol. Well no rush, it'll be there for anyone to read I guess, and anytime."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
- "Yes it is Natalie, it feels good to start out fresh again. Everything looks good right now on my end, hope it's the same or better on yours. Thank you for the comment =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Making It Right" by Gray Vision
- "i felt so sad reading this, as i had to put one of my beautiful dogs to sleep last year...he broke his back.
you captured the essence here of that feeling here.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Finality" by Gray Vision
- "Woah, Lily you changed your pic, very nice, oh and I'm glad to see that you enjoyed this peice. Thank you very much for your time =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
- "Yes, Ice that's exactly what I was trying to show with this peice, I'm glad you liked it though and I'll make sure to keep writing, thank you =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "What a Day" by Gray Vision
- "Hmm, sounds like me. I spend too much time worrying about others instead of myself. When their lives are on track again, I realize that mine is still in shambles. I swam the deepest of oceans for my friends, only when they made it back to shore did I find that I had no ship of my own. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
- "Thank you so much, I'm so greatful for your wonderful insight and appreciation for this peice, everyone looks at valentines day as a do of love and love only, but it's not for everyone and this is why I wrote this peice. Thank you for taking to the time to comment on this peice =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Valentine Day" by Gray Vision
- "thank you for another wonderful write! :)
this is a very true view of valentine's day, makes me feel a bit sad though... valentines day is just one of those holidays that u either love it or hate it...u should listen to valentine's day from linkin park...XD. write on! u have great talent :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Valentine Day" by Gray Vision
- "wow...this is so nostalgic...wonderful wonderful first write!! more comments should be on here =O...i love how u used twelve o clock in such a clever way to convey your message...wonderful write! childhood is something that needs more appreciation....write on :)"
Posted by Unknown on "What a Day" by Gray Vision
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