Comments by All Members
- "You my friend depicted with precision the serenity of that afternoon...Your words as flowing and soothing as the breeze itself, so much atmosphere...I never wanted to leave. An excellent write man, wonderfully done."
Posted by Unknown on "~Street Side Cafe~" by theXkevorkian
- "right now i can definately relate to feeling like theres just too many words and none of them quite fit. well spoken my brotha"
Posted by Dei on "My Prison" by theXkevorkian
- "Wow, this was great. A seussian feel but hit hard none the less. The reality of our lifebox makes me feel a bit claustrophobic. Way to make me breath heavy. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
- "Very nice X, TVs are the hell we've made for ourselves... I like the part about church... I was in a church once that had a very expensive system that put them in every one's TV... For jesus you know, Amen and send us money... a real travesty... Thanks for bringing it all out in your piece... the last verse you wrote, "think it for you..."... maybe you meant, think for you boxes... a cool line... write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Digitalized Me" by theXkevorkian
- "Nice way of thinking outside of the box ... That was a bad pun... Good poem anyways."
Posted by carterv on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
- "This one really makes you think. We have created this life for ourselves and being free is what we fear the most, we are prisoners in our own cells, or in your case, boxes. Great poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
- "well written and different, thank-you... you forgot the box in the mind, where we go and hide away..
Now I'm off to listen to alice in chains, man in a box...lol thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
- "Nice... so many times I thought similar thoughts... all the right angles... all the frames.... like we're putting ourselves in mugshots, in squares and bars... like we are afraid to be free.... like we need to be in a safe somewhere. Nice write, thoughtful, clever... and warning well put."
Posted by Unknown on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
- "I really like the ideas that this piece raises in terms of the classical theory of economics and corporate social responsibility... there are arguments on both sides.... a very thoughtful write.."
Posted by Unknown on "Philanthropy " by theXkevorkian
- "Sounds like a brief glimpse into wonderful followed by confusion on why it couldn't last. Must have been pretty profound. An interesting journey, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Inaffectionate :" by theXkevorkian
- "Nice, and to answer your question... Sometimes... :) This was a nice blend of both humor and realization. Nice write."
Posted by Unknown on " Best Friends :" by theXkevorkian
- "I understand, the originality of it actually adds to the authenticity of experience and the desolation you feel.."
Posted by Unknown on "Misery :" by theXkevorkian
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