STOP !!!!!!

By theXkevorkian

Stop :

I close my eyes and wish I could stop the hearing too .....

Drifting along in a dream like state where everyone wanders for an awakening
to see something  and know its not  there ...

I am in the void  ...

I am alone in the gentle sollitude of forgotten slumber .
Awakening of forgotten senses .
The ones left under the shells of men .

In this void of deprivation
Searching for the forgotten Lost ..

Being recircumsized into the  something nothing .......

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Copyright 2010 theXkevorkian
Published on Sunday, January 3, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i really like tthis one it's sad.

  • A former member wrote: I really liked this one. I can relate to it, very well-worded. Keep writing! =]

  • A former member wrote: i can relate. sometimes i feel like im all alone "in the void" but writing seems to keep me company :-) nice piece

  • A former member wrote: that whole recircumcised thing really did me in.... I was just floating along numbly and then.... someone's takin a blade to my penis. nosirreee. some kinda nightmare image there, yep.

  • A former member wrote: oh and welcome to the valley

  • A former member wrote: a void of deprivation. hm, sounds like life. *smiles* it my not feel like it but, your still living. ~Moony

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