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"Vel...superb. Your talents know no bounds. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"I really can't help but drool over this poem. Good one you hot momma!"
Posted by Unknown on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"All over your face."
Posted by Choronzon on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"hahahahahahaha me and two of my friends go on regular picnics...Never have i thought of a picnic in such an erotic sense, now i guess i have *winks*"
Posted by Solace on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"i loved "euthanasize the desire that now floods your lips" this really is good stuff."
Posted by suicideseason on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"very nice...what time do you want me there???-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"Smell the consequence.....splendid.....now where is this picnic of yours? ~Jaded~"
Posted by Jadednoir on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

""euthanasize the desire that now floods your lips"... Damn, vel. You did it again. Made me sweat. Great job. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"Mmm I did love this, there is so much passion in your words. ...You don't sound sexually frustrated to me. :P ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "XxX Picnic..XxX..{Honey and Yen}..Adult" by A Velvet Tongue

"yes yes yes...awesome.....sounds good to me..ahah......once again...great stuff....those places sound great!"
Posted by Unknown on "XxX...Misbehaving...XxX" by A Velvet Tongue

"All my feelings I can sum up in one word, BEAUTIFUL! "
Posted by Unknown on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue

"I'm speechless. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "I Became The Rain...." by A Velvet Tongue

"i like this piece very much, you seem to have influence over people when you write...myself included"
Posted by Unknown on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue

"I still love this.. but please do delite the wont saty up for long part.. cous your a damn liar. hey that does make you even more goth, I guess"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue

"oh fuck this cracked me up... especially the "And dance in one spot I just swing my arms around alot"! I read once in an article on goths that this move was called "The Tree". What bollocks! No goth I know had ever heard of it. This satire is perfect."
Posted by flying_fox on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue

"...oh,my goodness...what a steamy write...obviously...awesome.i love it.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "XxX...Misbehaving...XxX" by A Velvet Tongue

"Oh my, what a nice write. You really understand the beauty of a man."
Posted by Unknown on "For what is the beauty of a man..?" by A Velvet Tongue

"A very nice erotic write! I really enjoyed this. Bravo!!"
Posted by Unknown on "My Liege ...{Ravenous}" by A Velvet Tongue

"*picks jaw up*....*bows* need anything while i'm down here *wink* ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "XxX...Misbehaving...XxX" by A Velvet Tongue

"Damn Vel...No one can write erotic like you. You seem to bring out the devil in all of us. Misbehaving...excellent..."
Posted by Unknown on "XxX...Misbehaving...XxX" by A Velvet Tongue

"...hey, cool, we had the same dream...hehe, as always, quite the enticing write... -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "XxX...Misbehaving...XxX" by A Velvet Tongue

"re. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue

"well all I can say is...Velvet, you'd change a good hetero girl like myself any day of the week. This is amazing. And, incidentally, am in total agreement with AlluringDecent. Brilliant. When my membership finally comes through this will be a fave for su"
Posted by flying_fox on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue

"wow wow wow wow. Pure erotica, empowering...no doubt you've had many at your mercy. I say again...wow. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue

"This is sensual and beautiful. I love this. It's nice to see writers who see sex for what it really is, something beautiful, not something to be hushed up and hidden. Great write hun."
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue

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