Comments by All Members
- "to provide an atmosphere conducive for not only being who one is, but allowing them to become what they may... perhaps this is a way of loving that moves beyond the grammar of possession... of reduction to expectations based upon what one has been... which can never be what one will be... very open, nice thoughts."
Posted by Unknown on "spiritual loving" by boneplate
- "hmmm...quite a resonant concept. i like the softness of this. the open.ness. .. . what one is to another is so moving and intimate. feels almost circular.. .. some good emotion in this."
Posted by Unknown on "spiritual loving" by boneplate
- "Great point. Entwining of souls is beauty..communion..worship..if it is sacrilege what a way to go....it was worth the trip..
Thanks for the comment.."
Posted by boneplate on "Sacrilege" by boneplate
- "again, i really like the concept in this; the sensual with the divine; a magdalene with the grace enough in and of herself. i think you should take this [possibly graven] image and write of it.......run with it. "
Posted by Unknown on "First Flower" by boneplate
- "not sure. .. but ive always been of the ehart/mind thta real love, even the physical anture of love...IS communion of sort. a holy binding; a naked soul flies from a bared body, doesnt it? and souls entwining.....is worship. or maybe that is sacrilege too? despite that, i find no sin...in the want of this. in the nakedness of the words themselves. . .. can only be beauty. "
Posted by Unknown on "Sacrilege" by boneplate
- "ahhahaaaa this is beautiful. I mean, that's gotta suck. I mean, how ironic that He is the middle they and it always comes between "you" and "me". nicely wrought in words soo crisp and sharp. Words spoken against the patriarchy perhaps.... "
Posted by Unknown on "Not long enough" by boneplate
- "this makes me wish I knew her... but I've never met an one such as this.... heavenly in every instant"
Posted by Unknown on "First Flower" by boneplate
- "dont know whether to envy this woman or to hate her; either way. .. . she is dire. you made her soft and luminous and more than she is with these words. pretty. "
Posted by Unknown on "First Flower" by boneplate
- "The wind changes us... so do the seasons. The wish to come back from that is great. Well done. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "winter leaves" by boneplate
- "On the flip side with that wind comes the opportunity to land in any given environment. I loved the concept behind this. Even in winter those things that seem lost to us are still below the surface waiting to surprise us all. Nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "winter leaves" by boneplate
- "This piece tells an interesting story. You may want to try and separate your stanzas a bit, in some places it's hard to tell where to pause and begin on a new thought. Just an friendly observation, excellent concept all the same. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "First Flower" by boneplate
