Sacrilege

By boneplate

Maybe its sacrilege,
to worship you.


making myself a
sacrifice.


I made you my
religion.



nothing is sacred.

maybe it never was.

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Copyright 2010 boneplate
Published on Tuesday, January 19, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Holy... this was so much punch in so few words.

  • A former member wrote: not sure. .. but ive always been of the ehart/mind thta real love, even the physical anture of love...IS communion of sort. a holy binding; a naked soul flies from a bared body, doesnt it? and souls entwining.....is worship. or maybe that is sacrilege too? despite that, i find no sin...in the want of this. in the nakedness of the words themselves. . .. can only be beauty.

  • boneplate On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, boneplate (56)By person wrote:

    Great point. Entwining of souls is beauty..communion..worship..if it is sacrilege what a way to go....it was worth the trip.. Thanks for the comment..

  • A former member wrote: my sentiments exactly... very well put! and welcome to the valley

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