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  • "The organism that was pinned to the dissection table was her. Those wings were spread wide on the table and pinned neatly to each corner. She inspected every feather with her magnifying glass, carefully classifying each differentiation." - Interesting description of self-examination. I could relate to this one. Ciao, T.S."
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Crash Landing" by OverratedGirl
  • "Well pretty, and deviant one of my kind... Don't hold anything back...lol... Did you feel almost as tho you cam after you released this? I did! Nice rant!"
    Posted by Devilish on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
  • "Initially it reminded me of the tell-tale heart. Then, fuck man... My face hurts from smiling, that shit was funny. You are an excellent writer this piece played out in my mind like a movie. Honestly. Thank you."
    Posted by Unknown on "The way you fucking chew" by OverratedGirl
  • "BTW, you are a fantastic writer... your works have a lot of life and fill my head with visual imagery. well done!"
    Posted by jajang829 on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
  • "I guess maybe I'm a minority?? I cook dinner almost every night... often WITH or FOR my girl, I clean without breaking the vacuum, do the grocery shopping, take care of my kids and still manage to fix the cars, mow the lawn etc.... oh and I work full time so my girl can go to school... but I do it all, cause she does the same for me...."
    Posted by jajang829 on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
  • "yeah, not so much... but then it is your ass, your bed, and apparently your place... so you can kick him out for no reason if you wanted. Stabbing, however, well, not so much."
    Posted by Unknown on "The way you fucking chew" by OverratedGirl
  • "This actually happened a few months ago in GA.. I attended UGA and this story is about my ridiculous roomate. Oh GA.. let's get another sterotype!"
    Posted by OverratedGirl on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
  • "If I can't, then you can't. Id prefer, if I can't, then show me, and if you can't, I'm here to help. Vacuum cleaners are simple though...might have something to do with the air in California - It all goes to their heads. Whoops! Another stereotype!"
    Posted by Aleas on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
  • "I hope you keep posting. I have thoroughly enjoyed these little glimpses into your personal life so far. BTW if you did not like the way he chewed then, you would probably not have liked the way he ate either. I'm just sayin...-Draven"
    Posted by Unknown on "The way you fucking chew" by OverratedGirl
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