I will not be one (an addition)
By OverratedGirl
A work inspired by end of an era
Not to disrespect the artist, chrome artic, I
rearranged a few words and added some things on.. while going through random
work, I came across this poem and it insipired me to re- join after I
had added a little more to it. Kudos to the orginal piece and artist. First
two belong to them.
Thank you.
And when the paper
sun burns up
Motivation has dulled the shine
Of all the things
you've felt entitled to
I will not be one
And when
time has weathered your eyes
You have forgotten what too look for
Of all the things you're certain of
I will not be one
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And when the world burns apart in front of you
The lies
all piled upon you
Of all the screams that would imprison you
I
will not be one
And when the cold snakes into your bones
Steeping into your very soul
with icy talons
Of all the things
that would radiate for you
I will
not be one
And when your reflection torments you
The weight of
the stone crushes you
Of all those ghosts that haunt you
I will
not be one
And
when you count the hearts laid down for you
That gave only to later take away
Of all those that have betrayed you
I will not be one
Comments on "I will not be one (an addition)"
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On Monday, May 24, 2010, chrome arctic
(11) wrote:
Thanks, very flattered that someone would do this,...glad i could be a bit of a muse
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On Thursday, October 15, 2009, ANGELSLAYER
(116) wrote:
Very nicely done. I think you completed the first two verses superbly.