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- "It is easy to be passive in life, wait for events to happen and to blame all the world for the unhappines you experience instead of actively taking your fate into your hands and actually do something to make your life better. I liked the passage where you point out that even with a passive attitude you might actually become active in case you knew for sure what your actions (or waiting) would bring. Consequently you then do not need to know the future just to make yourself to act :] Often you know the outcome anyway ;]"
Posted by Flat on "The Future" by angelunderneath
- "You know I agree on you with this by a very large margin..A picture does speak a thousand words..your appearance..like it or not..may you not care to be judged..is and will be interpreted by your dress choice..the face,smirks you make..the grooming..the fore/background..all together for a battle ground for criticism and generalization..a picture can speak for itself..so be cautious if you want to make a good impression.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "a picture" by angelunderneath
- "May them rest into a forever peace..This a real deep write..with the repeating verses it created a tone..not forgotten..easily marked in time...good tribute"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "50 years" by angelunderneath
- "I can sort of relate to this at some point in my life..you said and structured it very well..I think that sums up a problem many,i mean many have had,has will have..so great write.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Passing of Time" by angelunderneath
- "Starting out I got a sense of paranoia..that oh so common fear of a loud boom that comes generally when its cold,windy(maybe),dark,rainy,maybe some hail..hey thats why this is Dark Poetry,,for some the absent sunshine is so haunting..that all this combined..a storm ..can be so frightning"Like a thousand fingers caressing"..that is a very sennsory image.touch...this part is like the solitary feeling and peace of mind when bare..nude in the calming rain..the next thrashing.excellent..getting off of the sen sensations..",under the cover of night..."..indeed so enticing..the darkness consuming..this is very sensual..I really like this stimulating journey of how one reacts in the storm..the powerful encompassing feeling of this natural beast..Thanks for the share..this definately very hot and inviting.. "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Storm" by angelunderneath
- ""A touch that is always fulfilling" this makes me wnat to be held so that i may feel warm and safe. beautiful my dear simply beautiful
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Posted by Aurora_Light on "Touch" by angelunderneath
- "perfection. You have captured it beautifully. I can feel it, not just from my own expierinces but from the written as well. "
Posted by Dei on "Touch" by angelunderneath
- "life as we often did, and she says "The hardest part was still feeling like a kid on the inside, my brain and heart get all excited and tell me to get up and go! Then I can't." It crushed me and scared me to no end."
Posted by Vampira on "On the inside" by angelunderneath
- "Great write, and the only thing I can think of to say saddens and scares me beyond this realm....your line "feeling like a kid on the inside" when I read that line I recalled my grandma...a few years before her death. I was sitting with her talking about "
Posted by Vampira on "On the inside" by angelunderneath
- "Don't know how I missed this one you sneaky little angel! I will say again you could have written this about me my friend, have are brains finaly become one after all these years? "
Posted by Vampira on "On the inside" by angelunderneath
- "i agree with vampira this is different but the imagery is astounding. i wa sshocked i havent read your stuff before. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "For herself" by angelunderneath
- "this gets me everytime i read it. so days it hits me harder then others. today is one of those days.. wonderful..~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "At the Same Time" by angelunderneath
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