Comments by All Members
- "Very expressive and deep. I enjoyed this because it cleared my thoughts and gave me a new interpretation of poetry. Thank you. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "You'll burn" by eske
- "Wow this is a really accurate description of how lying can end bad"
Posted by Unknown on "Lies" by eske
- "...fascinating image: standing in the power of the waterfall...being decimated by it..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "waterfall" by eske
- "This was a really good..emotional .. Very personal piece..and personal for me too in a small..strange way..kinda creepy how I can relate and how much.. That voice that will linger in her future..the shadow visual was sweet..nice write"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Dear Sophie" by eske
- ""The cloud called dream did cry" I loved this line. You have a gift and I think you should keep sharing wityh us."
Posted by Wiccad on "The Staircase" by eske
- "The last two lines are just perfect. They complete the poem, and are good on their own. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by carterv on "Resonance" by eske
- "A like the consistency kept with the colors closest to red.. signifying blood..Those first five lines were really good..Indeed a warm hued and cold felt portrait..Thanks."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Bloody Witch" by eske
- "More in depth info now that i recall exactly, this was dedicated to a schizophrenic artist i met. She often spoke to me in riddles and wasted a lot of my time, but i loved her art."
Posted by eske on "When I Found You." by eske
- "I wrote that piece when someone told me that I over-think things. I came to the conclusion that there is no such thing as that, thinking is what usually cures my stress. This is my mind and you're looking at it, dwell as far as you can if you get lost I'll hand you the map."
Posted by eske on "When I Found You." by eske
- "A very interesting write. A "princess of dismay" is a striking phrase. It's so true how a good actor could be perceived as perfection, when in reality they're simply faking their way through everything. I enjoyed this, however, I'm rather lost in the last four lines. I almost want to say that the speaker stole her imperfections... Clearly the speaker is the victor, the better of the two, so, imperfections are really perfections, perhaps. But something tells me I'm looking into this too much, or seeing what I want to see. Certainly a thought provoking write - I enjoy anything that makes me think."
Posted by wilted on "When I Found You." by eske
- "this is very similar to a piece i wrote lately... but any way it is very good, i like the dialogue. =]"
Posted by Moonflower on "I'm Nothing" by eske
- "this is very beautiful.
I love the way the words just tell a story of a lost love and the hopes of a return."
Posted by Unknown on "Rain" by eske
- "the opening line was enough for me. . .. . the rain appeals to my senses [and deeper] in ways i cannot word. and you personalized that beyond compare in that opening. . .. . the rest was rainfall.. .. . welcome."
Posted by Unknown on "Rain" by eske
- "This was beautiful, I loved the comparison and analysis. Great job and welcome to DP"
Posted by Foreverlost28 on "Rain" by eske
- "wow!...darkly passionate. I kinda had a feeling that was coming...though i loved it anyway... "...and I always thought that I wasn't the jealous type. " Lovely"
Posted by RubyXero on "What I saw.." by eske
- "Thanks your comment comes to me as of great value."
Posted by eske on "Hate" by eske
- "loved it!
well done!
clever too...regret leaves anyways...
I wrote a similiar poem to this...
after 8 yrs. of hating my ex-
I called it...Dear Hate your're
fired...you simply can't get the job
done...thankyou for your steadfast
loyalty, however it is clear you
are simply making me tired and weary.
Good luck in your next endeavor.
If you need references, please feel
free to call me.
Sincerely,
Kathleen
p.s. Please don't forget to take
yourinflated ego on the way out!
I was really sick and tired of
hate...
I loved your poem!
way to write it so perfectly!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Hate" by eske
