Comments by All Members
- "Of all your great words, I liked these lines best: The greatest blessing in life is inspiration
love is man-made
jealousy is a sickness
anger is a gift
honesty is rarer than you might think
lust is beautiful
beauty is dying
perfection is a myth
It's simple science "
Posted by Edgewalker on "The Black Widow's Lament" by Blood Saga
- "You are beginning to be another of my favorite poets. Your choice in words, your style and slight pauses build the tension and beautiful release of your poems. Don't stop. You are great. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Tea Leaves" by Blood Saga
- ""fragmented bone
and fermented whiskey.
bruise my shadow.
cut my flesh.
i have plenty to spare. . .--love these lines. Melancholy write, well done.
"
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
- "i really love your style. it's like nothing i've ever read before... keep it up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
- ""trace my veins. . .
so that i might find my heart
again." This line made the piece...love it.
"
Posted by Narcissa on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
- "I..Have a mere memory of reading this before. Maybe its deja vu (I'm not accusing of plagarism) just remember something...the first few lines took me back to a poem I wrote once.. reminded me to finish others... and I like the style, the way you used the spaced periods..gave it a slow feeling..like the calm ocean. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
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