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- "Just dropping a line, like screaming a sign.
Maybe we were lovers once
(Perhaps during the Ming dynasty).
Romancing a ghost in requiems of us,
Dearest (I’m sorry) if we died once,
Reincarnate it’ll happen again, (re-) reincarnate it’ll happen again.
A hundred times we’ll die; a hundred times we’ll fly
Through guillotines tempted and execution lines cut.
(A simple glance secures my eyes)
Standing, drowning in prophecy fulfilled,
Wearing a daisy in your hair, we shout,
“Where tears once filled my lungs, they’re now filled with your breath.”
We (in a collective thrill) recite elegies.
We (in a collective thrill) sing dirges.
For lost loves and lives that’ll never be.
I loved it, it is sort of like the one you commented on mine awhile back. Which I changed a lot and would appreciate your opinions or...if you like it more."
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