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"*breathes* this was honestly a little mind boggling but absolutely magnifecent. each part spoke to me volumes. this is amazing. your words...they go so deep, this is...WOW. i cant say enough. :D wow."
Posted by Moonflower on "never write while drinking (collection 1)" by heroineyes

"Beautiful. To know such love is a gift. Treasure it...Loved this."
Posted by Narcissa on "in the rundown restaraunt, where i carved your name into my arm" by heroineyes

"This pulled me in like a David Letterman Velcro suit... holy shit this rocked:)"
Posted by freudian-slip on "everyone is talking to themselves (about themselves)" by heroineyes

"Goodness.... My heart sank in reading this. I read it over and over, trying to grasp the beauty of it. It is very nicely written, though, it only weighs down my soul..."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "everyone is talking to themselves (about themselves)" by heroineyes

"when i read your work i am so overwhelmed with your obvious intelligence! its definitely enjoybale to read but u really make room for ppl to see through and to YOU. write on..."
Posted by disposable on "love song, [our fucking]" by heroineyes

"im jealous of the moon and your muse. obviously a romatic is always appreciated but intelligence to boot?! sigh...."
Posted by disposable on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"Absolutely gorgeous and marvelously artistic, my Dove. I embrace it with thankfulness, and return the love it expresses even more."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "dream, dream, dream me a pleasant story in perfect harmony" by heroineyes

"Ventured back to this piece to place a comment I should have upon my first reading. other than the cigarettes and coffee, this poem is very descriptive of my days here... Well written"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"love the minimalist quality; even the nebraska part. .. . .well done. nessa"
Posted by Unknown on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

"well, thank rhys (Jess, the Goddess) for allowing such a write...not me"
Posted by heroineyes on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"Lovely, lovely write, I really like the stanza about the falling sky. Very eloquent work."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"I have always adored the title of this, and the poem does not disappoint. Such a beautiful, heartfelt sentiment. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "in the rundown restaraunt, where i carved your name into my arm" by heroineyes

"This is one of the best pieces I have ever read on here. It speaks with such clarity. Even the imagery is so very vivid. It must be some wonderful, enchanting love you feel because it is evident the inspiration must have been born of a gorgeous muse for there is substance here not found in others one's heart finds ordinary. This is grace incarnate and not only a tribute, but an admirable testament of love. Thank you. I find this humbling. Much Respect."
Posted by Unknown on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"God, Darling, this is beautiful. It makes me feel so loved... I feel quite the same, Dearest. A wonderful write."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

""everytime i look at the stars i know we aren't far apart. and i'm glad i woke up or i might have missed You." - I've definitely felt that. Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

"i know how you feel. my connection with my lover was the stars. still is. when i miss him, i look at them and hope that he's looking at them too. or that they're looking at him for me. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) " by heroineyes

""the sky will be so jealous of your eyes" - I could feel the whole piece, but that line especially stood out...simple, pure, truely felt. Nicely done! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

"This work is so wonderfully expressive, Love, and I can feel Your much beloved appreciation in each word.... Beautiful."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

"Sweet verse, sweet flow and with an undercurrent of the bittersweet throughout, just beneath the surface. Wonderful work :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Oh, But Honey I'm not Who You Think I am" by heroineyes

"I felt as if you were talking about me. It's very moving."
Posted by Unknown on "Oh, But Honey I'm not Who You Think I am" by heroineyes

"I felt this piece talk to me about one I loved and lost, bringing with it a bittersweat taste to my soul. well done "
Posted by sixsixnine on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

"This was as evasive as it was beautifully expressed! Such a well-written and tough-provoking expression!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

""The sky will be so/ jealous of your eyes." Wonderful line. This definitely conjures the image of a thoughtful journey."
Posted by wilted on "I-80 through Nebraska" by heroineyes

"This read perfectly in my mind tonight, a real stirrer of thoughts and inspiration. Opened with a wicked mind-cracker of imagination and followed with excellence. Nice one :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "the government makes counter-culture fashion" by heroineyes

"Fucking amazing, babe. Another great work. "
Posted by Rhys Ki on "the government makes counter-culture fashion" by heroineyes

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