Comments by All Members
- "Cold at rest and open. It feels like the end of a long journey and the pause before the next. This poem could simply repeat it'self, like a progression through existence. Your imagination adding new realms of adventure with each cycle and pause. A cycle or endless canon or both depending on your perspective, the music your mind feels in the background make it all wondrous. "
Posted by Unknown on "Cycle" by Withering petals
- "Short and sweet. It reminds me of addiction. I'm an alcoholic in recovery. I'd swear the next day it would be better. Then I'd get up and pop open that first beer and lose another day. It just went on and on and on. Nice write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Cycle" by Withering petals
- "oh my my my. this is one helluva despair, desolate-filled recess your mind has invented.you've tapped on feelings, fears, and things inside myself that i fear to give into, cause i know if i do, i will never resurface. darkly disturbing, and so very well pieced. thank you for sharing a part of your soul with us."
Posted by natalie on "Black Lake" by Withering petals
- "firstly, i just wanted to say how very much i loved your famous quotations on your page. very inspiring. and i just adore your style of writing...your own personal flair for imagery is very refreshing. thanks for posting."
Posted by natalie on "Thoughts that Can't Possibly Exist" by Withering petals
- "beauty is not always skin deep, but this hurt to read.such low self esteem...i know this thought too. :( hang in there beautiful. "
Posted by natalie on "Concept # 121" by Withering petals
- "was thinking as i read, this should be done on an open stage. this had the subtle rage hidden beneath well crafted wording. wonderful wordplay.(bows) you rocked this piece!"
Posted by natalie on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals
- "felt a little trapped myself after this heavy piece.
these phobias can truly be the death of us, for although we are alive, we do not truly live. welcome to dp and thank you for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Walls" by Withering petals
- "I agree, it is the stand still that kills. Knowing oneself is first and foremost I believe, love is more satisfying than hate, even though the pain of both can be just as great and it reminds us we're still alive, I do thrive on the challenge of dealing with overwhelming emotion's and that is why I agree with "it's the stand still that kills" I really enjoyed reading this. A great write. "
Posted by Magdalena on "The Stand Still" by Withering petals
- "This was going great until you pulled the plug. Perhaps you wandered too far afield and lost your way? Have faith and press onward! Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Lost My Epiphany" by Withering petals
- "Wow! Horrific images of dread & inevitable injury. As a devout claustrophobic I can really relate to being 'trapped'. Great words."
Posted by Unknown on "Walls" by Withering petals
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