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- "Ive always wondered, what contains the universe...how can it be finite? Our logic simply cannot account for the universe. We cannot even grasp the concept of infinity/eternity ( our minds are conditioned to only understand a beginning and an end) This was a wonderful proof. :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "A Stance on the Infinity of the Universe" by Lawless Fighter
- "WTF!?!? This is spectacular!!! I was laughing my ass off the whole time! I just can't wait to see what you say about the jews..."
Posted by Trigger on "Genesis. . ." by Lawless Fighter
- "It doesn't mean you have to write 11 lines. Just less than 12. Ten lines, or eight, or six, would have also qualified."
Posted by Liz on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "Wow that seems a little harsh. . . Idk about you but making a rhyming poem that has an odd number of lines seems like a really off-balance thing to do. . "
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "it was LESS THAN 12. not LESS THAN OR EQUAL TO. there is a subtle mathematical difference involving this not qualifying"
Posted by Liz on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "Uh. . idk about you guys. . but. . to me if it rhymes does it really matter how its spelled?. . when i read a poem i read it out loud. . not check its spelling to be sure its gramatically correct. . i mean i appreciate the idea but. . i just dont see how that would change anything. . ."
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "I really hate to say it, but 'ind' in 'find' is not a suffix, sorry. You need to have a root word to affix a morpheme to, then you need a recognized morpheme to affix in such a way as to produce a meaningful result. For instance, the suffix 'ly' should probably not be affixed to 'find' since I don't think it produces a recognizable result. But I do appreciate the intent behind your suggestion. "
Posted by Unknown on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "g ray/p ray, d ead/br ead, bl ind/f ind..... alternating suffix's, ie- four/more, white/right, one/sun...... in one half, it was done, the other half, not... i was merely stating, it makes it simply feels more original."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "The last 2 lines are, for me, the best. This was a good piece. It has a cool meloncholy to it, with a taste of pain. This is nice. Keep it up."
Posted by Trigger on "Dawn's Breeze" by Lawless Fighter
- "oh, well thanks for letting me know... what suffixes would you suggest changing? Maybe specific examples would be make your criticism more constructive?"
Posted by Unknown on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "In grammar, a suffix or ending is an affix which is placed at the end of a word. Common examples are case endings, which indicate the grammatical case of nouns or adjectives, and verb endings, which form the conjugation of verbs- TM wikipedia.... just constructive critisisim..."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
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