Comments by All Members
- "the list of 'things' taken for granted keeps getting longer and longer..... soon he'll run out of oil... his globe will be unbearably warm... and no woman in her right mind will procreate with him... haha.. this is funny as hell. nicely done:)"
Posted by elisa on "We're not the same cookie fucker!" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "i agree with Dark Philosopher on that...:) your work creates such a beautiful picture. you have a way of not only drawing in your reader with whatever interesting subject for that day, but your imagery is amazing. i truely enjoy ever piece that i read from you. "
Posted by RubyXero on "White hands stitching Crimson Xs" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "this was an incredibly vivid childhood memory, i felt as if it were my own and went so deep in the details and the coincidence of it all, that i thought i heard my mother call me down for dinner in the distance. i was a child again for a moment cursing my doll that i broke for my fault. very very very nice write. ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "White hands stitching Crimson Xs" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "Very engaging. Sticklers for grammar will remind you that it should be 'piousness' and not just 'pious'. You've got some interesting imagery, thematic and somewhat epic. Might do to have it as a longer piece. Just an idea. -END"
Posted by Unknown on "Serpents to Snakes" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "WOW! This is very awesome! I think it's a good poem but the title just strikes me as sort of weird. I also think you might add more verbs or more thoughts that connect the whole idea. Sort of expand on your images. I dunno, I am not great at poetry advice. But I think it's pretty good."
Posted by Unknown on "I Ate the Monsters that Broke my Skull." by Kaleidoscope_Heart
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