Comments by All Members
- "Liked how this was emphasized by an uneven metrical pattern BP. At first a bit disoriented but then realized it was done to highlight or accentuate the text and not lull the reader with a singsong tome of forced rhymes. Cheers and well done for these perceptive thoughts my friend and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Graffiti Prophet" by bpathos
- "I agree...the title an author gives is an open window to their souls. It’s like naming their first born child. More often then not they spend as much time naming the art as it took to write it. Btw I loved both title and body "
Posted by Unknown on "Milk Carton Portrait" by bpathos
- "Reads as though a near death experience warranted the truth bye told.. Much enjoyed."
Posted by natalie on ""Beyond"" by bpathos
- "Very clever and insightful write on the Internet and drone age where modern technology seems to be more and more robbing us of our humanity and personalities. Very nicely wrought."
Posted by carlosjackal on "" Overfuture "" by bpathos
- "Classy closing here BP and good to read you again! Your laundry list of things to change was timeless, and the "Change for the sake of change" is usually done for pride of ownership I'd guess, and so glad you included it here. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on ""Change"" by bpathos
- "Well-said commentary and this fits nicely with "Children are their oppressors and women rule over them" said about the fall of Jerusalem as I recall. And they didn't even have smartphones yet BP! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on ""Social Media"" by bpathos
- "We can rarely see reality for what it is. What it is changes hugely through perception anyway.
Yet with all these technologies and massive media influences telling us what's what it has become awfully difficult to keep in mind the simplicities that make up the important things in life. Like each other.
I swear it all has us so wrapped up in ourselves. "
Posted by drasticdaydreams on ""Looking Down"" by bpathos
- "The name of this poem is perfect.
Very lovely piece. The repetitive 'I see God' is reminiscent of a prayer or chant, an affirmation. "
Posted by drasticdaydreams on ""Beyond"" by bpathos
- "It brings a feeling of something well hidden, yet just about showing... as if you almost have all the pieces to the puzzle of life. Oh the verses are delicious. I'm terribly curious, what meaning did you intend to put across here ? "
Posted by drasticdaydreams on "Graffiti Prophet" by bpathos
- "We are proud, we are free, and we are falling. Nice to read something more social-political. "
Posted by Geronimo on ""Social Media"" by bpathos
- "You are a pioneer for writing and posting this IMO. Oh yes "The pretty lies are sold". We can choose to do it differently if we wish. A false persona robs only the liar of making real and meaningful connections. And for what?"
Posted by Cantara on ""Social Media"" by bpathos
- "How true! Change is never easy, especially when it's forced. When I first started on meds this is how I felt. "
Posted by Unknown on ""Change"" by bpathos
- "i think im the only person left who dosnt have facebook or a cell phone...still a link in the chain though...i have a computor and im a gaming geek....XD we are all doomed to our devices. why work hard to learn, when you can google and have someone else do the work for you? the smater we get, the stupider we become. see? auto correct didnt catch that, must be a word."
Posted by lovely_plastic_smile on ""Looking Down"" by bpathos
- "i love the way you keep the pace, the content is really interesting, touching a lot of points about peoples own self perceptions. love it "
Posted by Unknown on "" Shadow Poetry "" by bpathos
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