Comments by All Members
- "So much passion, pain, that special lilac smell captured in this poem..Magnificent read...Thanks..."
Posted by tindomerel on "Wet Lilacs" by Narcissa
- "this is an awesome piece...lady rage is something we cant associate with for long...she tears our morals and our love apart...beautiful poem"
Posted by Unknown on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
- "too brutal, hon... I hope you don't want to go... the world is better as long as you stay.... *bear hugs*"
Posted by Unknown on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "well composed from the start... any way I can call upon Lady Narcissa? to appear?"
Posted by Unknown on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
- "mmmm dolorous..... I hope you're not one of "the ones"..... too much loss here for words. Keep writing, hun. best wishes for better days, as you deserve."
Posted by Unknown on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "...if wishes were words Id be around more and Id writing something worth a damn...but I do thank you..."
Posted by Narcissa on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "miss you Mooney...sorry Im not around more...sure miss those old days...and thank you. "
Posted by Narcissa on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "Thank you Jeff, It has been a long time...hope you are still writing...I guess to find that out I need to check out your page :) ...time on the other hand is very stingy at the moment...I do hope all is well w/you..."
Posted by Narcissa on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "I've been wondering where you went! I'm so glad you wrote something and posted it. That last line is a piercing truth that bleeds the person you speak of. This was awesome."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "and you have said plenty. plenty enough to make me cry. *smiles* you truely are beautiful, but you already knew that. "
Posted by Unknown on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "sometimes I have to curl up in your words.... ponder their placement.... revel in their sounds.....faster.... lilacs capturing a memory.... you capturing lilacs... ways in which the moment reveals it's pain as the beauty is recalled.... slashed and forgotten... crushed.... by a heart......... wonderful infusion of present perspective with past recollection."
Posted by Unknown on "Wet Lilacs" by Narcissa
- "intoxicating...it's funny how we can't seem to let go..yet can't bear to hold on..so painfully human...such lovely melancholy..I love it when you post :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Wet Lilacs" by Narcissa
- "I like this poem and the analogies but not all men are shallow. Remember it takes a man with a broken heart to love with it entirely."
Posted by Unknown on "The dragon.flies" by Narcissa
- "however my words flow they can never compare to yours...thank you...thank all of you."
Posted by Narcissa on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "right. i am not reading anymore tonite. crush you? crush me. you've no idea. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "Beautifully told..the imagery sewed together by stirring words that touched a hanging emotion..Glad to take the frame down to have a second look..Thanks for this amazing write."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "It definitely pierced the heart, imagery in every word, emotions of sadness, yet confusion... as if your there in every line, bravo my friend."
Posted by A Life Without You on "Waiting" by Narcissa
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