Comments by All Members
- "what a slammer...normally I fear the co-writes if the styles don't gel easily and I can notice it. Not here, a warm blend and a splendid flow, a great treat of a piece....deadly tag-teaming with a punch of poetry! I'd certainly get in line to write with you missy. Wonderful...a pleasure to read and experience peeps - well done :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "When Shadows Speak w/Moonie" by Narcissa
- "write that book!!! Yes agreeing with my peers - that sensuous combination of nature and the self, the vivid vitality of this exceptional poem...and that last line is bloddy G for gorgeous...g-g-g-g-gorgeous! Wikid....wikidly spun - I love it and am a huge fan of your poetry. Sign me copy?! :P Bloody brilliant stuff :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "I'm the night, I'm the night, I'm the dark and the light... I love collab's... I love to try and identify the pieces parts with the authors. Murmurs in the mist... if shadows were ever to speak, I bet it would sound like murmurs in mist.... the imagery is powerful... the forlorn, the love... what distance does to love. Beautiful work, ladies."
Posted by Unknown on "When Shadows Speak w/Moonie" by Narcissa
- "and a scent of classicism drifts from these words, I imagined awaking to an empty pillow... where once a summer's vision slumbered in the vitality of spring... the impression of a love vanished too soon, cool to the longing touch of the morning sun. Are there not some who hold tightly the flower long past its bloom? Sweet sweet sentiment expressed with ageless imagery."
Posted by Unknown on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "Of course...you were the one that inspired me to find a flower I neglected. So between you, the book Im reading, and some unresolved feelings this is what you get."
Posted by Narcissa on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "I want to be the eye of the nigt thats afraid of the dark but watches thoughs who need it. ^_^ hehe *huggles kelloggs*"
Posted by Unknown on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "And can I be that icy breeze that causes uncontrollable shivers tonight if I promise to make it warmer tomorrow?"
Posted by Aleas on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "You must be doing something right, to get these kinds of comments and bookmarks. You should seriously consider authoring a book of poetry. You have so many pieces relating to flowers and nature, it makes the concept of it very easy to handle. Who knows, you might be exactly what this world is looking for. Do me the favor and at least look into what it would take to get it done."
Posted by Aleas on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "its as if i know what you look like by the way you scribe,...its written all over your face, ... so much going on within, ... *how well you let it out.
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Posted by Unknown on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "If i were to quote the lines I loved I would be copying your poem word for word. So colourful, so beautiful. You are so talented :-)"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "that was fucking beautifully written...bookmark for sure!!!
...Theres a warmth in your eyes
Like wine at twilight...
loved that line...and the last stanza...
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Posted by heroineyes on "Paper White" by Narcissa
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