Comments by All Members
- "It is the same question that pumps through our veins with our blood. Even in the end, sometimes our heart might lead us astray, always better to think logically then emotionally. That is my opinion. Great write. ~Angel"
Posted by Loketha Angel on "What to do?" by brokenheartedmarine
- "a theme easy to relate to and familiar for a lot people... not everyone uses capitals but you'll find your own 'fit' in how you like things... keep up the good work..
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Posted by NikesRain on "did you hurt?" by brokenheartedmarine
- "Again Dancing pinnedt his one. Your words are good, and the stanzas aren't clustered together which make them easy to read. You're doing great. =) "
Posted by Err0r on "did you hurt?" by brokenheartedmarine
- "I agree with Monkey, this is slightly teenish. You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make them drink. If they don't like you, they don't. Go find smoeone worth your time. "
Posted by Err0r on "Can't you see me" by brokenheartedmarine
- "Use capital I's. Cous it's the right thing to do. And not to be a typo Nazi. But *Raises finger* re read and repost. Anyways. I belive poems like these are good for the writer to get out. "
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "did you hurt?" by brokenheartedmarine
- "This hurts my heart to read, and I'm sorry that you had to go through this. But take comfort in knowing that you will one day meet a girl who loves you more than you could ever love her. I'm here if you need to chat."
Posted by Unknown on "My lost love" by brokenheartedmarine
- "if you aim for a rhyme scheme, maybe it would help to alternate your me's, and you's, it might add some tangibility. but i can fully empathize with not getting what you want."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Can't you see me" by brokenheartedmarine
- "Hmmm, the ultimate saga of those in uniform and the ones they love. Seems we can't do much but stand in conviction with our hearts on our sleeves..."
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "My lost love" by brokenheartedmarine
- "If my Marine...ex...would say this there would be no second thoughts. I'd defiantly run back to him in a moment's time, as bad as he hurt me. Sad to say, I suppose. People here would be mad."
Posted by Army Barbie on "My lost love" by brokenheartedmarine
