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did you hurt?
By brokenheartedmarine
when you said goodbye
my heart broke
you said it was for the best
that you feel out of love
how could you have moved on so fast
no tears did i see
did you feel any regert
for doing what you did to me
i loved you more than any of your past
you told me you would never leave me
all my friends told me
i shouldn't have trusted you
but me heart told me what to do
i wanted to give you the world
you were afaird, so was i
i cried and, still do
did you ever cry
you told me that were sorry
but you didn't act it
the next morning you came in with her
you didnt care about my pain or my heart
i hope she does to you what she did to me
but dont worry i still love you
i know thats foolish of me but....
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© 2007 brokenheartedmarine
Published on Wednesday, June 27, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "did you hurt?"
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On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, NikesRain
(1298)
wrote:
a theme easy to relate to and familiar for a lot people... not everyone uses capitals but you'll find your own 'fit' in how you like things... keep up the good work..
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Again Dancing pinnedt his one. Your words are good, and the stanzas aren't clustered together which make them easy to read. You're doing great. =)
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Use capital I's. Cous it's the right thing to do. And not to be a typo Nazi. But *Raises finger* re read and repost. Anyways. I belive poems like these are good for the writer to get out.
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